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ask you to give my money back, or I would plain to the Consumer’s request you to be kind enough to solve the problem as soon as :1)禮貌用詞,不能過激。結(jié)尾:表達(dá)希望問題得到迅速恰當(dāng)解決的強(qiáng)烈愿望。we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one’s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just bee, next year, say, a bit smarter.② 原文要點(diǎn): to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors talking about death③ 參考摘要:People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they bee very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their , they fear very , they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)開頭與結(jié)尾用語開頭:Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear sir or Madam, Dear President, Dear Sales Manager, Dear Dean, Dear Professor, To whom it may concern, Dear ,結(jié)尾:Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours, Yours sincerely, Best regards, Best wishes, lovingly yours, sincerely yours,l 正文第一句朋友:Hi!How are you?Hello!I hope everything is !How is everything going?如不認(rèn)識(shí):I was a guest at your hotel from June 25 to am a student at your college, enrolled in the puter :Thank you for your invitation to the international medical conference on October you for your letter dated October :I am writing to advise you for the loss of my credit ’d like to inquire about course am writing to plain about/of the poor service at your 結(jié)尾段發(fā)出請(qǐng)求:I am looking forward to your prompt reply to us at your earliest :once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience accept my apologies once :I expect to hear from you very give this matter your immediate 1. 投訴信開頭:自我介紹,交代投訴內(nèi)容,表明本信的目的和要求正文:說明情況,講清利害,分析利弊。摘要題型寫作實(shí)例① 試題題目Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have e in understanding some of the profound aspects of have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it。⑥ 簡(jiǎn)化從句,用簡(jiǎn)短的語句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語句。④ 摘要應(yīng)與原文的觀點(diǎn)保持一致,并且仍按原文的邏輯順序排列。② 摘要的長(zhǎng)度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一,考試時(shí)應(yīng)遵守規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)限制。它可以包括三個(gè)組成部分:①點(diǎn)明主題,解析文章或書籍的目的或意圖;②介紹主要內(nèi)容,使讀者迅速了解文章或書籍的概貌;③提出結(jié)論或建議,以供讀者參考。陳述性摘要只陳述書籍或文章的主題,不介紹內(nèi)容。寫摘要時(shí),最好用第三人稱的完整的陳述句,文長(zhǎng)一般不超過200個(gè)詞。書籍摘要,一般放在封二或封三;論文和學(xué)術(shù)報(bào)告的摘要,一般放在正文前面。摘要通常多采用第三人稱撰寫。摘要的位置一般放在一篇文章的最前面,內(nèi)容上涵蓋全文,并直接點(diǎn)明全旨。國(guó)際會(huì)議要求的論文摘要的字?jǐn)?shù)不等,一般為200字500字。因此寫摘要時(shí),應(yīng)用最為簡(jiǎn)練的語言來表達(dá)論文之精華。通常國(guó)際刊物要求所要刊登的文章字?jǐn)?shù),包括摘要部分不超過1萬字。范文Directions: Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each August 16, 2005To: The leader of student service departmentFrom: Li MingSubject: TelephoneDear Sir,I would like to remind you that we are in want of a telephone for each a university student, we need to cope with the daily increasing munications with teachers, friends and people outside the need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for most of us have mobile phones and address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as ,Li Ming三、摘要文章摘要是對(duì)所寫文章主要內(nèi)容的精煉概括。正文、結(jié)束語和署名等項(xiàng)與一般信件的格式相同。許多機(jī)關(guān)有自己特制的信箋,在寫書端時(shí),其格式和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用與一般信件的相同。它的內(nèi)容可以分為以下幾項(xiàng):書端(Heading)收文人的姓名、頭銜、地址(Addressee39。在公文函件中,它的等級(jí)是比較低的,主要用來提醒、督促對(duì)方,或就某個(gè)問題提出自己的意見或看法。4)言語得體,真心誠(chéng)意。注意事項(xiàng):1)格式:稱呼,結(jié)尾,署名2)簡(jiǎn)明扼要,清楚明確??忌诖痤}卡2上作答。下面是一些短語:相似的比較:in parison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner相反的比較:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, pared with ?, ?三、換言之沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。6)排比(排山倒海句)文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)地詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語,如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for , energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(氣勢(shì)恢宏)要想寫出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則既然是挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。舉例:This is what I can he can go with us or not is not 、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:When to go, Why he goes away?5)附加(多此一舉)如果有了老婆,總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候,她會(huì)插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent coat was thin, but it was :despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding3)因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋友?可見,講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了。比如說:I enjor music and he is fond of playing ,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also :besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warmhearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語是一個(gè)辦法!比如:I cannot bear :I cannot put up with want :I am looking forward to ,表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因: