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ir ?、?要么是supported by each other或者是support each other ?、?拼寫錯誤,正確的應(yīng)該為cooperation ?、?語法錯誤,改為:is significant或者is of great significance ?、?這是直接翻譯漫畫中的字幕,應(yīng)當(dāng)安排在第一自然段中?! 〈似恼屡娜缦拢骸 、?通常大作文不用寫題目。 作文批改實(shí)例: Both Win①In this picture, we can see tow ②disable people abandon thire③wood legs and support by④ each other go further. They help themselves! From the drawing, we can learn that coorporation ⑤has a significance ⑥to the people who has not perfect body. You have a leg, I have a leg, you and me get together that we can go everywhere we wanted⑦。雖然有部分同學(xué)意識到了作文訓(xùn)練的重要作用,但