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ach other或者是support each other ?、?拼寫錯(cuò)誤,正確的應(yīng)該為cooperation ?、?語法錯(cuò)誤,改為:is significant或者is of great significance ?、?這是直接翻譯漫畫中的字幕,應(yīng)當(dāng)安排在第一自然段中?! ∽魑呐膶?shí)例: Both Win①In this picture, we can see tow ②disable people abandon thire③wood legs and support by④ each other go further. They help themselves! From the drawing, we can learn that coorporation ⑤has a significance ⑥to the people who has not perfect body. You have a leg, I have a leg, you and me get together that we can go everywhere we wanted⑦?! ∑浯危匾晫懽骶毩?xí),更要注重寫后的批改 當(dāng)然這些都不是我們的重點(diǎn),今天我們主要目的是指出考生在準(zhǔn)備作文的時(shí)候經(jīng)常會(huì)犯的一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤,并給大家提供