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should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: ? 名校校園正成為旅游新熱點 ? 校園是否應對游客開放,人們看法不同 ? 我認為 …… 問題 ?字數不夠 ?標題的大小寫問題 實詞:名詞、代詞、形容詞、數詞、動詞、副詞 虛詞:冠詞、介詞、連詞、感嘆詞 ?個別詞匯短語錯誤: 旅游勝地 熱門話題 tourist attraction hot topic/issue ?表述觀點的句型不會運用 ?語法錯誤 ? In addition, if open, there will be a few unsafe factors enter into school gate. ? Should the university campus be open to tourists has aroused wide concerning. ? But if the university should be open to tourists, has advantages and disadvantages. ? …so that is benefit to teenagers. ? Along with the advance of society, more and more problems brought our attention. ? Others think that don’t open is a better choice. ? They think the tourists will destroy the peaceful of the college. ? They think the university campus is where have cultural atmosphere. ? Some tourists, who are rude, may bring bad influence to university students. 作文類型 段落組織模式 現(xiàn)象解釋型 描述段(描述現(xiàn)象) 說明段(闡述原因或影響)議論段(表明看法) 問題解決型 描述段(描述問題) 說明段(分析問題的原因或危害) 說明段(說明解決問題的方法或措施) 對比選擇型 (提出兩種觀點) 議論段(分別闡述兩種觀點) 議論段(作出選擇并總結觀點) (提出兩種觀點并做出選擇) 議論段(論證“我”的選擇的正確性) 議論段(總結觀點) 觀點論證型 議論段(提出觀點) 議論段(論證觀點) 議論段(