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【正文】 bike were slightly injured. At that time, the driver came out of the car, and asked about the two person’s injuries. Seeing this, I dialed 110. in a short time, the traffic police arrived. 第一章 句式優(yōu)化 一．長句和短句變換 １． [原文 ] His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. １． [優(yōu)化 ] His father, a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. 長句固然能表達(dá)出復(fù)雜而縝密的思想，但如果片面最求復(fù)雜句式，反而會(huì)顯得華而不實(shí)，累贅． 寫作中句子的長短應(yīng)根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要而定，有話則長，無話則短．短句不僅指句子長度較短，也指句子內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)精練，簡(jiǎn)潔是寫作的一個(gè)重要原則，用詞累贅則是寫作的忌． ３． [原文 ] He didn’t have enough experience, which is the reason why he didn’t do the work well. ３． [優(yōu)化 ] He didn’t do the work well for lack of experience. ２． [原文 ] Perhaps they basically distrusted our capacity to judge correctly. ２． [優(yōu)化 ] They distrusted our judgment. 1. 短句變長句 4． [原文 ] A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage, perhaps because they are still establishing themselves in their careers and haven’t had enough time to get to know themselves and many members of the opposite sex, but family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married, and so they marry in haste without knowing each other well. 4． [優(yōu)化 ] A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage. As they are still establishing themselves in their careers, they haven’t had enough time to get to know themselves and many members of the opposite sex. However, family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married. So they marry in haste without knowing each other well. 第一章 句式優(yōu)化 與漢語相比，英語更注重動(dòng)作本身，而不是動(dòng)作的執(zhí)行者，因此在英語中被動(dòng)語態(tài)的使用相對(duì)多一些，但這并不表明要以為地追求被動(dòng)語態(tài)的使用．事實(shí)上，什么時(shí)候用主動(dòng)，什么時(shí)候用被動(dòng)，主要是由陳述對(duì)象而定．英語寫作特別強(qiáng)調(diào)陳述對(duì)象的一致性，因此在選擇主動(dòng)和被動(dòng)時(shí)一定要慎重． １． [原文 ] We should pay more attention to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country. １． [優(yōu)化 ] More attention should be paid to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country. 二．主動(dòng)句和被動(dòng)句變換 ３． [原文 ] When the prime minister arrived at the airport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately. ３． [優(yōu)化 ] When the prime minister arrive
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