【正文】 sportstoonlineactivities. ②Thereisahotdebatearguingwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot,especiallyforcollegestudents. ③ Asforsuchaquestion,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.④Somebelievethatrecreationishelpfulifwewanttokeephealthyphysicallyandmentally. ⑤Whiletherealsosoundsanoppositevoice,whichclaimsactivitiesbri,someyoungpeopleareeasilyaddictedtothevirtualworldonline,whichaffectstheirstudybadlyandmayleadtoworseconsequencesaswell. ⑥Asforme,Iholdabeliefthatrecreationalactivitiesdomoregoodthanionshipswithothers,too. ⑦Aslongaswecanarrangeourtimereasonably,theywilldefinitelyprovidemorebenefitsforus. 精彩點評：①開門見山，擺出事實。⑤利用過渡句銜接文章。③使用非限制性定語從句，豐富句子結(jié)構(gòu)。 加分亮點： getaccessto 接觸 infavorof 贊同 vivid 生動的鮮明的 Part5:2021 年 12 月 LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags ①Recently,limitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbagshasbeenbroughtienceinourdailylife. ②However,whatwouldoursocietybelikewiththeexcessiveuse? Thesharpincreaseinusingplasticbagshasgivenarisetosuchproblemabsorbedbysoil, ③whichblocksthedrainagesystemandcauseswaterpollution. ④ What ?sworse,somebagsareofpoorquality,andevenharmfultopublichealth. ⑤Awarenessofthematterinquestionisohing,butmoreimportanttou,usingofdispo,peopleetotakeenvironmentfriendlyclothbagsandthebusinesscostinsupermarketsiscutdownaswell. ⑥Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectboththeenvironmentandourownhealth. 精彩點評：①開門見山，提 出議論點。⑤利用 inmyopinion 銜接文章，引出自己的觀點。②話題一轉(zhuǎn)，闡明這個舉措的弊端。 加分亮點： undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地 indispensable 必 不可少的，必需的 significance 意義 Part4:2021 年 6 月 ，目的是?? ? FreeAdmissionstoMuseums? ①Recently,doingso,theycanattractmorevisitors,andofferthevisitorsmoreopportunitiestoexploreandgeteasyaccesstotheworldofhistory,cultureandknowledge. ②However,somepeopleviewthatthepracticealsobringsproblemsandco. ③Forohing,theirmainconcernisthatwithmorevisitors,itispossiblethatobjectsexhibitedcangetdamagedmoreeasily. ④Foranother,itbeesahugeeconomicburdenformuseumstorunasusualwithoutanyprofitsfromthevisitors. ⑤Inmyopinion,inthefactthatthegovernmentshouldprovidemoreopportunitiesforc,kidsandteenagerscanacquireknowledgeinamorevividwayinthemuseums.⑥Ihopeallthepeoplecansharethesamenationaltreasuresinmorefreemuseums. 精彩點評：①開門見山，提出論點。⑤和⑥結(jié)構(gòu)連接詞 inthefirstplace 和 furthermore 的運用，使得論述清晰明了。③用 notonly..butalso 句型介紹綠色校園的內(nèi)涵和外延。 加分亮點： embarrassing 令人為難的，尷尬的 giveprioritiesto認(rèn)為優(yōu)先 Putemphasison 強調(diào) Part3： 2021 年 12 月 ?? ，我們應(yīng)該?? CreatingaGreenCampus Duringrecentyears, ①thetopicofagreencampus,whichhasarousedwidelypublicattention,isbeingmoreandmorepopular. ②Undoubtedly,agreencampus,theindispensablepartforthedevelopmentofcollegestudents,hasaprofoundimpactonbothindividualsandsociety,foritssignificancecannotbeneglected Agreenenvironment,ratherthananythingelse,playsadecisiverolei, ③itshouldalsobementionedthatapreencampusincludesnotonlytheplaceswherethestudentslive,reensurrounding,thatcase, ④innoplaceotherthancampusshouldweattempttomakeagreenatmosphere. Duetotheseriousnessofthesituation,itiscrucialforustotakeeffectivemeasurestocreateagreencampus. ⑤ Inthefirstplace,it ”sessentialthatlawandregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedbythegovernmentandauthorities. ⑥Furthermore,itishightimethatweenhancedtheawarenessofthestudentsthemselves. ⑦ken,itisreasonableforustobelievethatagreencampuswillbeachievedinthenearfuture. 精彩點評：①開門見山，提出綠色校園的話題已經(jīng)引起社會關(guān)注。⑧和⑨使用 ontheonehand? ontheotherhand?結(jié)構(gòu)，針對上述成因，提出兩種對應(yīng)的解決方案。⑤和⑥ foronthing?foranother?具體列舉不同的原因，層次分明。②和③使用thus,andwhat” sworse 說明 該現(xiàn)象造成的結(jié)果：拼寫錯誤連篇，文章結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。⑧簡要總結(jié)前文所提的具體側(cè)咧，是文章結(jié)尾不顯突兀。④分析包辦所帶來的后果。②自然過渡：但是，有些父母卻為孩子包辦一切。 SavetheEnergyResources（節(jié)約能源） ,worldoilconsumptionreachedanewrecord,causingoilpriceintheinternationalmarkettoskyrocketamazingly. Asfor 中國 ,itwasreportedthatmanytraditionalmineralcitiesinnortheastern 中國hadrunintopredicament,withtheireconomycollapsedandworkersunemployed,onlybecausecoalhadbeenminedout. Fossilenergyresources,includingcoal,oilandgas,areunlikesunlight, ’,they’ regoneforever（能源類話題的經(jīng)典句子） . Iftheyweretobeexhaustedbeforewecouldfindsufficientreproductiveresourcestoreplacethemwith,we ’dhavetoliveinentireblackoutagainlikeourancestorshavedohou’ sofcoursenotwhatanyonewouldwanttosee. Duetotechnicallimitations,peoplestillhavetoutilizetheseresourcesnow. Asaresult,dbedevelopedandappliedtoreduceenergycostinindustryanddailyliteanypracticethatwastesenergy. Humanshaveoveresomanycrisesinhistory,andwe ’resuretowinthistimealso. 第四篇：大學(xué)英語四級優(yōu)秀作文 大學(xué)英語四級考試優(yōu)秀范文 Part1:2021 年 12 月 ，父母應(yīng)該?? HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent ①Itisbeyondreproachthatchildrenarealwaysconsideredtheappleofparents ” eyes,whichisespeciallytrueinsinglechildfamilies. ②However,manyparentsgosofarastotakeovereverythingfortheirlifeandstudyeventotheirfuture. ③Itisnotunusualtowitnessthatanincreasingnumberofchildrenareacpaniedbyparentontheirfirstdayincollege. ④Ideclareinnouncertaintermsthatitwillendupwiththechildren ”,bein, ⑤whatshou