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ng from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。要點提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時作息,杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。8.俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。其次短文中語言得體,句式準(zhǔn)確,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章分為三段,第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的,因此了文章的話題。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。為提升文章檔次,還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:支持的人們的理由;反對者們的理由;自己的看法,可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述,這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,有層次。題目中給出了一個表格,里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由,只給了一些短語,我們需要組織語言,將這些要點用正確的英語表達(dá)出來,并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%) popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞:We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意:(1)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;(3)文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。7.書面表達(dá)(原創(chuàng))今年春節(jié),很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲,但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如take place,in our hometown,in the past,used to be,go to do,on foot,by bike,better and better,more and more等。6.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示,寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文.(80詞左右)文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù).內(nèi)容要點:過去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈(clean and clear).3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄(narrow).4街道寬闊(wide),干凈整潔5居住條件(livingt be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。文章中句式變化豐富,有簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句,長短句結(jié)合,增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文主要分成三段,每一段主題都很明確,敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。文章有以下幾個優(yōu)點:首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,沒有遺漏要點。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。寫作時應(yīng)注意:首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容,不能遺漏要點,可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但要與上下文意銜接起來。寫作時學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個內(nèi)容提要,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整,用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題,寫一篇演講稿。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue