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is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。每年春節(jié),每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以第一人稱、一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā),語法規(guī)范,符合英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述:首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的;接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望;最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分:首先是介紹自己的身份;然后寫留言的目的,包括冬令營的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座;最后簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。內(nèi)容包括:;(包含冬令營的時(shí)間,聽Liz Payne的講座);。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來說是…的?!军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型:I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way.我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。如but, so, then等。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly,students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn),不可遺漏。t control themselves and often play games. What39。 觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系;一些老師反對(duì)擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲;有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊;你的觀點(diǎn)1. 2.要求:1. 表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 詞數(shù):80100詞左右(征文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī),一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點(diǎn)。China is a nation of etiquette(禮儀),中國是一個(gè)禮儀之邦??梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn),寫作時(shí)注意不要漏寫。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette (禮儀). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn),可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮,是短文連貫,通順。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。此處because