【正文】 n bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。假如你是李華，請你為校刊英語園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧?．自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。文章最后的兩句話也點明了文章的主題。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹木。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。寫作時要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。因此寫作前，要仔細(xì)看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。注意句式的多變，長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。這兩個地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并對將來提出兩點希望。將來希望……（兩點）要求：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。交通：新的飛機場已投入使用多年。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。做到：要點要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對；你的看法。文章要有層次、流暢?！驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見，寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。贊成的理由反對的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費時間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙（be cheated）1. ...2. ...注意：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點并進(jìn)行合理拓展。 3．人們對于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時要注意表達(dá)的條理性。點建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真