【正文】 。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)校園安全問題越來越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”。參考詞匯：心理問題mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓π@欺凌的看法。 請以 “My opinions about school bullying” 為題， 寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?．（修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we39。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活（lowcarbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。我愿意幫助別人。第二部分：具體介紹三年中最難忘的經(jīng)歷：別人幫助我的經(jīng)歷。提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.【解析】【分析】本文一篇話題作文。，過渡自然，語法正確，富有邏輯性。包括時間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想。吉林省實驗中考模擬）B）初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。做到：要點要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。用的短語、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。、短語、句型。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文。注意：1. 詞數(shù)。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。重點語句：It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個人的職責(zé)，make full use of充分利用， let’s take action!讓我們行動起來5．（根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the en