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On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng),即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市,城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。自雙創(chuàng)以來,我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀,人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng),讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。文章要有層次、流暢?!驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見,寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,確定文章中心。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙(be cheated)1. ...2. ...注意:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展。6.人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示,可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述,注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。3.詞數(shù):80—100詞。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如make joint efforts,as junior students,for example,obey the traffic rules,run red light,in addition,no longer,in public,and so on,what39。;;;;(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts