【正文】 As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行“雙創(chuàng)”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習(xí)慣。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。7．書面表達假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。語法規(guī)范、準確，用詞得體。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達流暢。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面：首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達出來，還應(yīng)注意補充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實；最后寫一個適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對你有幫助等。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。