【正文】 ather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。7．書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級(jí)句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語(yǔ)、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。（2）發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗(yàn), 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請(qǐng)你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。【點(diǎn)睛】這類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。【詳解】，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。第二段要寫(xiě)詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊?？梢苑秩螌?xiě)。100詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括：讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù)）。5．書(shū)面表達(dá)你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類(lèi)學(xué)校的選擇。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。而First, I39。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如I39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________