【正文】 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達要正確。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點。 商品 goods。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。 ”5．隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。“跑步”，正文部分詳細地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結構清晰，前后呼應?！驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。4．題目②“持之以恒，方得始。恰當?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題，表達出自己的觀點（認為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表自己的觀點。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。在你班的主題班會上，同學們進行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表你的觀點。3． 書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。In recent years, many cities in China have been