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汽車去了那里。本文提綱:上周末我和幾個(gè)同學(xué)去了青龍寺。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。認(rèn)為閱讀材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,所給提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn),根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,列出提綱。要求:1 參考提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2. 語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息4. 字?jǐn)?shù):不少于70字【答案】Last weekend I went to Qing Long Temple with some classmates. It was sunny on Sunday. We went there by bus at 7:00 . On the bus we talked and laughed, we were so happy. At 9 . we arrived there. We enjoyed flowers, took many pictures and flew kites in the morning. At noon we had piic at the foot of the hill. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. At 4:00 . we left Qing Long Temple and at 6:00 . got home. We were so happy, though we were tired.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,話題是假如你是李華,上周末你和幾個(gè)同學(xué)一起去了青龍寺(Qing Long Temple)游玩,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇游記,介紹一下你愉快的周末。西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬)假如你是李華,上周末你和幾個(gè)同學(xué)一起去了青龍寺(Qing Long Temple)游玩,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇游記,介紹一下你愉快的周末?!军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。要求:1. 包含所給信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同學(xué)們,沐浴在晨光中,行走在上學(xué)路上,當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí),你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)許多好處。9.(它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!敬鸢浮緼 Special DayToday is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如such a special day,give him a surprise,a lot,make a dish,want to do,with the help of,return home等。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名,否則以零分計(jì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目“A Special Day”寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,記敘你特別的一天。8.( (4)注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范:大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。(3)切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子,注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。(1)學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理??忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范,時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確,敘述清楚條里,信息表達(dá)清晰、完整,意思連貫。原諒他之后,我感到輕松愉快。他甚至送我一件禮物讓我開(kāi)心。邁克也意識(shí)到了他的錯(cuò)誤。那時(shí)他在家里玩電腦游戲。我打電話問(wèn)他發(fā)生了什么事。我準(zhǔn)時(shí)到達(dá)那里。本文提綱:我還記得我朋友邁克和我之間發(fā)生的事。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn),列出本文的寫(xiě)作提綱。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在80詞左右。認(rèn)為閱讀材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,認(rèn)真閱讀提示問(wèn)題( happened between you and him/her? did you decide to forgive him/her? did you feel after forgiving him/her? still remember what happened between ...),提示問(wèn)題就是本文的提示要點(diǎn),確定要點(diǎn),根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,列出提綱。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn39。 注意:不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷,主要內(nèi)容包括:你們之間發(fā)生了什么,你為什么原諒了對(duì)方,以及原諒對(duì)方之后的感受。7.(修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了,在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示:Time for sportsKinds of sportsChange of students’ health and studyChange of school life要求:(1)文章的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名;(3)內(nèi)容完整,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,意思連貫,語(yǔ)句通順,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。” 的理念深入人心,校園里出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化。6.(它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。注意:1. 要點(diǎn)齊全,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; 2. 從思維導(dǎo)圖Sayings部分,選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母窈侠砝迷诙涛闹校?3. 詞數(shù):100詞左右; 【答案】例文 Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如one of the best ways,learn much,an exact picture of,a careful observer,seeing is believing,no matter,a lot等。四川中考模擬)旅行是學(xué)習(xí)的最好方式之一。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。【詳解】這是篇材料作文,所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給的比較零碎,不完整,所以考生需要結(jié)合實(shí)際情況補(bǔ)充完整,是文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意:;,意思連貫,條理清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;3 詞數(shù) 80 左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。江蘇中考模擬) 為提升南京城市形象,我市已啟動(dòng)老小區(qū)出新改造工程。s easy for me to get along well with等介紹自己合適志愿者的工作;用動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)have some plans for、 介詞短語(yǔ)like the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and so on.、賓語(yǔ)從句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in ,短語(yǔ)豐富,句型多樣。,是文章文句精彩。,第一層闡述自己申請(qǐng)的理由,介紹自己開(kāi)朗的性格適合志愿者的工作;第二層詳細(xì)介紹給英國(guó)學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動(dòng);最后表明自己的期待。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li lHua【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,以書(shū)信格式,根據(jù)所給材料寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信;書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)材料要用全,注意緊扣主題,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all,there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing,so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and so on.I39。提示詞語(yǔ):get along with, friendly, places of interest, Ch