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3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。8.李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō), 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹(shù)澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹(shù)木。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式,調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏,提升文章檔次。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序,這樣可以使文章條理清楚。因此寫(xiě)作前,要仔細(xì)看圖片,了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情,并提煉出要點(diǎn),列出所要用到的詞匯、短語(yǔ)等,或者列出大概的寫(xiě)作提綱。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約100詞的短文。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。提示詞語(yǔ):Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問(wèn)題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一人稱(chēng),注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書(shū)寫(xiě)工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。用詞準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)言得體,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,主次分明?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過(guò)自己的人。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手,寫(xiě)完整的句子。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:首先要符合題目要求,包括題目中要求的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意上下文的銜接。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題為提綱,發(fā)揮想象力,充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息,組織語(yǔ)言,連貫成文。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題,介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過(guò)你的人?!敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。要點(diǎn): 1. What kind of person is he/ she?2. How did he/ she inspire you?要求: 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。4. “inspire” 一詞的漢語(yǔ)解釋是“激勵(lì);鼓舞;賦予靈感;或啟發(fā)思考”等。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示,可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述,注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to e