【正文】 Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a puter as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself ingoogling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to 替換 verythrilling 替換 exciting a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 interested in 替換 searchan army of 替換 a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of with the advancement of science and technology, puters pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popularCoincident with ? 非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)＂與?一致＂的意思，替換 With ?Advancement 替換 developmentPour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter intoCurrent(currently)替換 nowAppeal to interested in individuals 替換 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly , we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering a start 替換 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly 。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s petitive edge代替 enhance one’’s petitiveness（提高某物競爭力）下面舉一篇我南京六級班上一位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。t mean that... is/are absolutely no/ in fact every reason(s)for us to believe/ accept/ resist/ reject that... these people fail to understand/ consider/ mention is that..., but it is quite another to say that...3）第三段：結(jié)束語：“用于文章結(jié)尾的語句” what has been discussed above/ Taking into account all these features/ Judging from allevidence offered, we may safely draw the conclusion that.... the evidence supports an unshakable conclusion that.... is(high)time that we placed great emphasis on.... is(high)time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of.... is little doubt/ no denying that further attention must be paid to the problem of.... is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation考前10分鐘可用的英語四級寫作技巧四六級考試越來越使模板無用武之地，閱卷老師在閱卷的過程中最多的是關(guān)注同學(xué)們的用詞和句型的使用。s advantage sounds ridiculous/ means nothing when B39。s opinions hold the opinion that..., while others claimthat... is no consensus of opinions among people as to the role/ view/ idea of....Some peopleclaim that..., while others believe that.... is a general discussion today about the problem/ issue of....Those who criticize...arguethat....They believe that...But people who advocate..., on the other hand, argue that.... people are of the opinion that....But I personally believe that.... people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that...., it is generally acknowledged that..., but I doubt whether....（2)圖表描述：“用于描寫圖片或數(shù)據(jù)的語句” 1990, it increased/decreased from...to... parison with 1998, it decreased/increased by figure has nearly doubled, pared with/ as against that of last has increased/ decreased almost twice/ six times, pared with... number is twice/ four times/ half as much as that of accounts for/ takes up...percent of the total.(占??的比例) number wasmore than/ less than..., a half/ third/ quater of the 1990 ）第二段：（1）原因列舉：“用于解釋原因的語句” phenomenon/change in...mainly result from the fact that... may regard the phenomenon as a...sign of.../ response to... are many causes/ reasons for this dramatic growth/,...Second,...Finally,... number of factors can account for the change in... contributory factor of...is... do people...? For one thing,...for another,.../ One reason is...Another is...Perhaps theprimary reason is....7....is also responsible for the rise/ decrease in...（2）觀點陳述：“用于比較、駁斥的語句”I．用于比較的語句 advantages of A outweigh any benefit we gain from as A is, it has its own one thing, it...。in short。in a word。consequently總結(jié)法是指在表達(dá)了一個觀點或舉了一個例子后，進(jìn)行總結(jié)、給出概括，這類關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：in this case。on this/that account。thus。for this reason。due to。because(of)。pared with...as a result。still。nonetheless。equally。instead。conversely。likewise。on the contrary。in contrast。otherwise。however。比較和對比比較是把兩種或兩種以上的事物進(jìn)行比較，以辨別出它們的相似之處；對比是將這些事物進(jìn)行對照，辨別其差異而指出各自的特征和本質(zhì)。especially。in otherwords。a case in point。like。for instance。the last but not the least2。then。in the first place, in thesecond place。besides。s more。furthermore。on the one hand, on the othe