【正文】 這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。高分作文標志1：四級120150字；六級150180字；2是否長短句交叉；3用詞是否恰當，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；4關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞；下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I（比如寫結(jié)尾時不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.）舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like ，its petitive edge will be sharpened ，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。s advantages are ．用于駁斥的語句 a lot of people believe that..., I doubt/ wonder whether the argument bears muchanalysis/ close examination opposed to widely held ideas, I believe/ think/ argue that... the popular belief/ idea is that...,(a)current study/ survey indicates that... may be right about..., but they seem to neglect/ fail to mention/ consider the fact that... it is widely accepted that..., it is unlikely to be true that... is true that..., but this is not to say/ it doesn39。for another, it.... A has enormous/ much/ considerable/ a distinct advantage over B..., it can notpete with B in...39。to sum up新東方四級寫作萬能句型(20070611 18:36:22)分類：英語學習貼一些新東方的四級寫作萬能句型，希望對大家有所幫助：1）第一段：（1）現(xiàn)狀說明：“用于文章開頭的語句” asked about.../ When it es to.../ Faced with...most/many people believe that..., butother people consider it differently/ regard it as... it es to..., people39。in brief。according to。on account of。therefore。hence。owing to。thanks to。since。in the same way。unlike。nevertheless。on the other hand。rather than。like。similarly。by contrast。while。yet。這類關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：but。in particular3。that is。namely。take...for example。such as。舉例類舉例法是用事例或數(shù)據(jù)對中心觀點進行說明論證的方法，舉例類關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：for example。next。(at)last。first of all。in addition。what39。moreover。for one thing, for another。列舉類列舉法常用在議論文中，當作者提出一個論點后，可通過列舉出一系列事實對其進行說明或論證。適當使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞是四級寫作必備的技能，大家應(yīng)該要引起特別重視。大學英語四級寫作——段落的連貫性(20070607 15:43:06)分類：英語學習在確定好一條條的擴展句后，怎樣把這些句子流暢而連貫地組合在一起呢？這便是關(guān)聯(lián)詞發(fā)揮作用的時候了。使段落連貫的方法之二是使用適當?shù)倪B接手段，一般是指關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用。按邏輯順序安排細節(jié)是使段落連貫的方法之一，常用的順序有四種：時間順序、空間順序、演繹法和歸納法。段落連貫性一個好段落在具體語言上和內(nèi)容上要有連貫性，段落中的句子要符合一定的條理和邏輯順序，句與句之間銜接要緊密，過度要自然、流暢，這樣才能反映出一個清晰的思路。所以這一段落是符合一致性原則的。s health, sometimes even in the 1998 fatal alcoholpoisoning case in Shanxi Province, for example, a peasant produced “alcohol”, dreaming ofbeing rich overnight。在一個段落就只有一個主題句，就是說一個段落就只能有一個中心思想，一個核心，段落中所有其他句子都要圍繞這個中心展開或鋪述，一切與主題句沒有直接關(guān)系的句子都要舍棄掉。大學英語四級寫作——段落的展開(20070605 10:56:54)分類：英語學習主題句與擴展句構(gòu)成段落，那么文章段落有什么樣的特點呢？1。內(nèi)容一致。清晰詳實；2。這就是擴展句的任務(wù)。如：Today more and more women are going out to ，沒有進行詳細闡述的必要，所以它本身只能是細節(jié)句，用來解釋主題句。改成：To improve reading ability, one needs to acquiresome reading ，范圍明確，便于細節(jié)描述。那么主題句應(yīng)該要緊扣計算器的使用利弊這個方面，eg: Calculators can obveousely benefit , overusing calculators will also do some harm to ，段落的主題便模糊不清，在進一步闡述時會失去方向感。主題句內(nèi)涵要廣，便于展開細節(jié)論述。主題句一般是general sentence，內(nèi)容明確、具體。主題句必須是個完整的句子，與文章主旨密切相關(guān)。主題句（topic sentence）反映段落的中心思想，體現(xiàn)文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)，讓讀者對作者的思路一目了然。其中寫好主題句是最關(guān)鍵的步驟。為了避免這個問題我們一定要仔細省題，弄清楚考題要求是寫議論文、說明文還是記敘文，然后確定文章主題和大致思路。數(shù)據(jù)引證（一般用在看圖作文中）eg: As we can see in the charts(柱狀圖，圓形百分比圖)，the number of Chinese people who goabroad has increased greatly between 1992 and is clearly shown in the charts, there is an increasing number of people who own a carduring the recent three figures in this graph（曲線圖）show us that...According to the graph, we can find that...It can be seen from the table（圖表，表格）that...eg: With the rapid development of..., the interview is being more and more important in of the development of..., great changes have occured in the educational system of mobilphone is very popular with college students.(很受學生歡迎)In recent years cheating in CET4 still prevails among the college students.（近幾年里四級考試舞弊現(xiàn)象在大學生中仍然很普遍。s the secret of success.” Charles Chaplin ever my opinion, selfconfidence is the first element on the way to your the old saying goes:“Knowledge is power.” The main way for us students to gain knowledge is from the some students argue that we should read extensively...It is well known to us all that “...”，比較eg: Some people say..., while others claim that...Some people believe..., but others argue that...Old people often feel that..., but for the young, it is....eg： What constitutes enough information for the decisionmaker? It39。常見的開頭的寫作方法大致有下面幾種：1。中國人喜歡先講道理最后給出結(jié)論，而西方人習慣先下定義，再慢慢解釋。至于如何開端、如何論述、如何結(jié)尾的問題，大家敬請期待下一回吧！當然我不會讓大家久等的:)寫作能力無法一口氣提高，大家必須在平時勤修苦練。結(jié)尾段進行總結(jié)，并提出解決問題的方法。一般由主題句和擴展句組成，主題句是觀點的高度濃縮，應(yīng)該言簡意賅；擴展句是對主題句的詳細闡述，應(yīng)該做到理由充分，內(nèi)容一致。中間段闡述必須清楚。文章字數(shù)有限，必須采取開門見山的方法，但開篇點題并不是說第一段第一句話就得提出問題，在這之前可以有所修飾，有導入的成分，但不要太長，一般第三句就得清楚、突出地把問題點出來。總的來說有三點要注意：1。這仍是三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段提出問題——告之大家會舉辦一次暑假志愿活動，第二段描述問題——介紹志愿活動的相關(guān)信息，第三段解決問題——怎樣加入志愿活動（報名信息）。本次志愿活動的目的、內(nèi)容及安排；3。又如2006年6月的題目：An Announcement for a Voluntary Program, 要求：1。“喜歡看春節(jié)晚會”是正?，F(xiàn)象，應(yīng)該作為問題的開端進行簡短介紹，“有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會”才是重點，必須給出相應(yīng)的篇幅做詳細闡述。但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會；3。以歷年的真題為例，2006年12月的題目為Spring Festival Gala on CCTV，要求：1。10．表示看法1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth．2）People have different opinions on this problem．3）People take different views of（on）the question．4）Some people believe that．．．Others argue that．．．例： People have different attitudes towards failure．Some believe that failure leads to success．Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor．However，others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers．第五篇：英語四級寫作句型大學英語四級寫作技巧簡介20091114 18:55大學英語四級寫作技巧簡介大學英語四級寫作技巧簡介——文章結(jié)構(gòu)(20070531 22:34:41)分類：英語學習英文寫作一直是學生們的弱項，四級考試將近，大家都很擔心寫作問題，在此我先簡單介紹一下文章的結(jié)構(gòu)問題，以后再談其他方面。2．表示好處1）It has the following advantages．2）It does us a lot of good．3）It benefits us quite a lot．4）It is beneficial to us．5）It is of great benefit to us．例： Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．3．表示壞處1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．2）It does us much