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【正文】 so does man. It is reported that a healthy man can live about seven days without food, but without water, he can live no more than three days. Water is also of vital importance to agriculture and industry. water can also clean the air. When it rains, most dusts in the air fall down with rain water, and thus the air is cleaned. Although about 70 percent of the earth’s surface is covered with water, many countries in the world are still short of water. What’s worse, in many places nowadays, water is seriously polluted. So we must do whatever we can to save water and prevent it from being polluted. All in all, we must protect water and make full use of every drop of it. (145 words) 。s area． As a result，some people waste the water． ? However， there are terrible water shortages． Most of the water can39。 ? A few people believe that the water won39。主題突出、層次清楚是很容易做到的，是考試中容易實(shí)現(xiàn)的得分點(diǎn)。 文始終低水平徘徊的主要原因之一。t cherish the water at all”是第一段的結(jié)果，應(yīng)該放到首段才是。如： “ but as an opposite fact， the water is in terrible shortage． ” 本應(yīng)該是下段的主題句。 Global Shortage of Fresh Water這一嚴(yán)肅課題。 【 點(diǎn)評 】 該文基本能用英文表達(dá)思想，但是存在兩點(diǎn)重大錯(cuò)誤： 清楚本段的中心內(nèi)容，尤其是后兩段。我們別無選擇，只能謀求解決矛盾的辦法。 （ 7） “ escape from”是 “ 躲避 ” 、 “ 逃避 ”的意思。 （ 6） “ in decreasing”與動詞“ cherish”， “ increase”并列。 （ 5）這里反映出考生使用英語上想當(dāng)然，閉門造車。且整個(gè)句子應(yīng)該是下段的主題句。即： “ Water will be run out of． ” （ 2）考生自作主張，隨意堆砌詞匯。t be used（ 3）． All the people don‘t cherish the water at all（ 4）． The improvement of person（ 5）， the pollution of water and the waste of water make us in short of fresh water． ? So today we should cherish every drop of fresh water in decreasing（ 6） pollution of water， waste of water and increase the utilization rate of fresh water． I hope that we will escape from（ 7） the shortage all over the world tomorrow． （ 1）動詞語態(tài)有誤。 as a result, I improved a lot in my English. 8. The room I found for you is a small flat. In
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