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【正文】 ool. In the fire, he and other people tried to put out the fire. Everybody on the scene was worried about the old man with thick glasses. After many hours of hard work, most of the equipment was saved. We all praised Mr. Zhang for what he had done. 范文二： Mr. Zhang is not only a teacher with rich experience , but also our friend. Many students admire him and consider him as the best teacher in the world. His class is very unfettable. In his class, everybody has the opportunity to express themselves so that no one escapes from class. In our life, he cares for every student and protects us from being hurt. Once he fought with others against a big fire in our school. Everybody on the scene was worried about the old man with thick glasses. After many hours of struggle, most of the equipment was rescued from the fire. Mr. Zhang was highly praised for what he had done. 高考作文各檔次的給分范圍和要求： 第一檔：（ 2530分） ?完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 ?對題中所提供的信息進(jìn)行了 恰當(dāng)?shù)拿枋?， 清楚地表達(dá)了自己的觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行了充分合理的論證。 ?有效地使用了 語句間連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 。 第二檔：（ 1924分） ?完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 ?應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。 ?應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 ?能描述題目中的信息，表達(dá)了自己的觀點(diǎn)并嘗試進(jìn)行論證。 ?有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。 1. Christmas is ing. Christmas is approaching. Christmas is drawing near. Christmas is on the way. Christmas is around the corner. 2. We should use every minute to study at school. We should make full use of/take advantage of every minute to study at school. We should devote every minute to studying at school. Every minute should be made full use of to study at school. 3. We should do something to prevent water pollution. We should take some measures to prevent water pollution. We should take some measures to prevent water from being polluted. Effective measures should be taken to prevent water from being polluted. 4. The doctor tried his best to save the patient.
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