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。s true that,In other words, play a more important role, our future is in our own hands,Even to this day,is regarded as one of the most等,文中引用了林肯的例子,聯(lián)系古今,使整篇文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)和豐富。很好的完成了試題的要求,同時(shí)應(yīng)用了一些比較好的詞匯,如:I can39。s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.點(diǎn)評:該文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,層次分明。 It is difficult to say whether ...is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of....however, from a personal point of view find...,我們可以清楚地得出結(jié)論…… From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arr