【正文】 。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語、作賓語用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡(jiǎn)捷生動(dòng)。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。要求從個(gè)人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫作。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。你的煩惱你的做法個(gè)頭不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少學(xué)會(huì)溝通，友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動(dòng)少……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。10．中學(xué)生在成長(zhǎng)過程中經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些煩惱。d better …；I39。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采取郵件格式，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。請(qǐng)用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。9．假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會(huì)參觀。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹木。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。寫作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。因此寫作前，要仔細(xì)看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點(diǎn)，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。 結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 要求：、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整；、校名和地名等信息；，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。第二，短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯(cuò)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!