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。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。 As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。s great honor for me to make a speech here.m a Dream Teenager(可聯(lián)系實際,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。學(xué)校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動,假如你是張明,請根據(jù)以下提供的要點,以“I39。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求?!军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認真審題。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。要點提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時作息,杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。9.俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。要求仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個方面來寫:介紹足球運動及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關(guān)信息。請你以足球迷的身份,根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示,用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語,如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ;再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ;After that,