【正文】 。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務勞動是他們學習如何做困難工作的好機會。亮點句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學校讓學生做自愿勞動以來，在學生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點明討論的話題，然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法，時態(tài)以一般現在時為主。 3．打掃教室就足夠了。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學生生病。 2．學生應該學會做艱苦的工作。 這件事在學生中引 起了強烈的反響，請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報告給學校。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習慣。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結構清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復合句；語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。文章內容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應該怎么做。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。內容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴重，去年已發(fā)生數次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。9．書面表達假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當的詞匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________