【正文】 山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞用了過去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動詞過去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息，表述準(zhǔn)確。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。還需注意的是英語表達(dá)和漢語的習(xí)慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用簡單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。通過分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式?！敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語將這些內(nèi)容完整地敘述出來，并簡單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。要求：。廣東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to fort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】 話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。,書寫工整、規(guī)范。請以“Say thanks to________”為題,寫一篇短文。 take part in參加； keep the air clean 保持空氣干凈16．（根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般將來時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。m writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day. Looking forward to seeing you there.Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，I39。It’s+形容詞+for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是怎樣的；make great progress 取得巨大進(jìn)步15．（At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. 【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter es, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have bee close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞，從我做起”主題教育活動，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ挥⒄Z作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。請你根據(jù)所列提示問題談?wù)勀銓@個活動的認(rèn)識，用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿。14．（亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容詞原級+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等?！敬鸢浮縎port makes a differenceXiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award. Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于圖畫作文，表達(dá)運(yùn)動讓小安的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。（2）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。請根據(jù)所給圖畫，展開適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。黑龍江中考模擬）（B）圖示作文：根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，展開想象，寫一篇小短文。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。這是一篇給材料作文。Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________