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。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級;Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性,條理清晰。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容,首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀,然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因,最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。s contribution (貢獻) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。參考詞匯:哺乳動物mammal。要求:1)恰當運用比較級和最高級;2)80詞左右。目前數(shù)量在減少,因為:1)人們砍伐森林,大象漸漸失去家園;2)人們捕殺大象,獲取象牙。10.假如你是李華,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時也可以包括日?;顒?。另外在寫作時可以適當使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時,會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。根據(jù)題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事;3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求:1. 語句連貫通順,文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:這是一個提綱作文。你最好的朋友是誰?你是怎么看待你們的友誼的?請以“My Best Friend ”為題,根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。本文大部分都是復雜句,顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。在比較的時候,作者用了多種方式,使句子不單調(diào),比如在比較溫度時,直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”,比較食物時,用了“as…as”等。對于城市A的缺點,作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。另外,一定要注意題目要求,把每一個信息都進行比較,不要有漏掉。避免漢語式英語。雖然字數(shù)要求不多,但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功,需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and ev