【正文】 。troublebecase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。easily．Insuccessfulhavethinkthiss lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。文章首先說(shuō)明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因，接下來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。在解答寫作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動(dòng)筆寫作。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。父母控制一切，孩子沒(méi)有自由。請(qǐng)從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。10．近期某英文報(bào)紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）”這一話題展開討論。短語(yǔ)和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…），“as time went by”（隨著時(shí)間的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大進(jìn)步），“keep on learning”（繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)），“In a word”（總而言之）等等短語(yǔ)使用正確。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析：這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問(wèn)題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂(lè)的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個(gè)問(wèn)題，其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言和銜接手段把這五個(gè)問(wèn)題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時(shí)也要注意在描述過(guò)去的故事的時(shí)候要正確運(yùn)用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語(yǔ)寫作水平。在比較的時(shí)候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時(shí)，直接用比較級(jí)“higher”在說(shuō)旅館時(shí)用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時(shí)，用了“as…as”等。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過(guò)。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語(yǔ)寫作的基本功，需要考生對(duì)常用的英語(yǔ)句型熟練掌握。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個(gè)城市的飛行時(shí)常、氣溫、旅館情況?？键c(diǎn)：材料作文。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來(lái)……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見(jiàn)下表）。Where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語(yǔ)從句。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)）做某事是怎樣的。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea綠茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth對(duì)…嚴(yán)格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不僅．．．而且．．．。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea_________