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:孟郊:唐朝:母親為兒子做衣服:母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分:信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題,可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己,并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。我將給你介紹《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)這首詩(shī)。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。【詳解】根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知,這是一篇書(shū)信類文章。最近他對(duì)母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)很感興趣,給你寫(xiě)信想了解該詩(shī),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信::孟郊:唐朝:母親為兒子做衣服:母愛(ài)的偉大注意:;,意思連貫,條理清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;: 80100詞左右,信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。句型:By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式,時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述具體怎么做時(shí),描寫(xiě)細(xì)致,條理清晰。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?,以及這樣做的意義。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛(ài)國(guó)、敬業(yè)、誠(chéng)信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。句型:被動(dòng)句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ),主語(yǔ)從句。文章條理分明,三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:該題要求寫(xiě)作體裁為書(shū)信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書(shū)信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。提示詞語(yǔ): Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問(wèn)題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of;不定式in order to;try my best to;狀語(yǔ)從句so…that …;比較級(jí)do much better in …、feel more confident等;短語(yǔ)多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要緊扣主題,文句通順。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事;文中寫(xiě)明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after ,I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事(愛(ài)好,習(xí)慣……),你是怎樣做的,以及你的感受。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)?!眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語(yǔ),句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫(xiě):贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。文章要有層次、流暢?!驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見(jiàn),寫(xiě)作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,確定文章中心。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________