【正文】 第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我為自己感到驕傲。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過(guò)，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題——我將介紹曾做過(guò)的引以自豪的一件事情。請(qǐng)以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你曾做過(guò)的引以自豪的一件事情?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干““苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)。要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2. 詞數(shù)80左右?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話(huà)題作文。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。要求：1. 包含所給信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同學(xué)們，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上學(xué)路上，當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí)，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)許多好處。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭?！驹斀狻繕?biāo)題都是以諺語(yǔ)的形式出現(xiàn)，所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個(gè)言語(yǔ)的意思，選擇自己較有把握的。a) A friend in need is a friend indeed.b) Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語(yǔ) proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?7．書(shū)面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)”征文活動(dòng)，你有意參加。作者根據(jù)題目要求,層次非常的清晰。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。本題給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：欺騙tick；許可permissionDear Wang Ping,I39。 m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has bee a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 39。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)電子郵件內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件，幫助她解答困惑。6．假如你是李華，是某英文電臺(tái)“ Say it”欄目的兼職編輯。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開(kāi)頭；第二段寫(xiě)你為什么這么做；第三段表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計(jì)劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要用第一、第三人稱(chēng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文，談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀(guān)點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)和建議。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫(xiě)出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文語(yǔ)言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡(jiǎn)潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)、不定式作表語(yǔ)等等語(yǔ)法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。常 識(shí)歷史悠久，深受喜愛(ài)世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢(mèng) 想考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))