【正文】 【點睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。同學們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯。14．E解析：Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述，注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。短文有如下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，并對細節(jié)進行補充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實、豐富。但為提升文章檔次，也應穿插一些并列句結構或復合句，以及使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。另外，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練文中運用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。 結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而固定結構But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。其次短文中使用了恰當?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式富于變化。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達，而自己的觀點則需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。10．A解析：Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導的表語從句。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學科對他的生活的意義。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。注意時態(tài)的運用，靈活運用所學單詞、短語和句型。9．A解析：例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。8．A解析：例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。d better …；I39。3. 高分亮點：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。2. 例文點評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應用文寫作。7．D解析：Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delic