【正文】 如He is always ready to help others.、He not only li。寫作時注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點。同時注意表達的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內(nèi)容。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在表格中有非常詳細的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達出來。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個曾經(jīng)激勵過自己的人。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。學(xué)生們可以這兩個問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實細節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。12．B解析：The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39?！靖叻志湫投縋rotecting the environment is our duty. 保護環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒e had better walk or take a bus. 我們最好步行或乘公共汽車。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。所提供的材料中列舉了近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，主要從空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對措施三個方面去介紹。s more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is being more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what39。11．D解析：Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people39。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難，父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時候要注意表達的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達。本文中時間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。9．D解析：One possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。高分亮點：短語：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。8．D解析：例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，寫出對學(xué)生的倡議。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。6．H解析：例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.