【正文】 ：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語——如果對方有任何問題，可以繼續(xù)問自己，并期待收到對方的來信。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。最近他對母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫信想了解該詩，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。本文大部分都是復雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。對于城市A的缺點，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個信息都進行比較，不要有漏掉。避免漢語式英語。雖然字數(shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。為了使生活更美好，社會需要正能量（positive energy）。句型：被動句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達清楚，并進行了適當拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。提示詞語： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear