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給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅持做的事;文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。為了使生活更美好,社會需要正能量(positive energy)。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點詞句,如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。初寫短文。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。對于城市A的缺點,作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過?!驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知,這是一篇書信類文章。:孟郊:唐朝:母親為兒子做衣服:母愛的偉大第三部分:信的結(jié)語——如果對方有任何問題,可以繼續(xù)問自己,并期待收到對方的來信。最近他對母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)很感興趣,給你寫信想了解該詩,請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信::孟郊:唐朝:母親為兒子做衣服:母愛的偉大注意:;,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;: 80100詞左右,信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。另外,一定要注意題目要求,把每一個信息都進(jìn)行比較,不要有漏掉。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The ot