【正文】 在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。10．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論，寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。9．書面表達(dá)?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。文章條理清晰，有層次?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a dif