【正文】 本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理分明。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問(wèn)題。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞?？键c(diǎn)：材料作文。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來(lái)敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來(lái)。注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。注意文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意不要漏寫。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn)，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。3. 提出至少2條建議。3． 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化；同時(shí)Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。do what we want, such as listening to musicat 4:45大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。at 5 o’clocktake a parttime jobclock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。2． 最近一份學(xué)生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學(xué)生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來(lái)越低齡化。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（I think ???；try one39。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。4．每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長(zhǎng)，作為初中生的你，你感覺自已比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化?請(qǐng)寫一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。5． 亞洲文明對(duì)話大會(huì)近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會(huì)相關(guān)報(bào)道，對(duì)華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來(lái)信向你了解中國(guó)文化。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)。如but, so, then等。6．人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________