【正文】 寫完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫錯誤，語法使用錯誤，字數(shù)是否達到要求。【點睛】認真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時，要注意清晰表達事情發(fā)生的開端，內(nèi)容及結(jié)尾。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對這件小事進行了總結(jié)，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。本篇文章,首先開篇點題,指出事情發(fā)生的時間及所經(jīng)歷的事件。要求：，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計。文章干凈利落，層次分明。 show your reasons why you remend them。 remend two traditional Chinese things。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them. The second gift I want to remend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and fortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves? I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】【詳解】本文主要是向別人分享想法，推薦禮物。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項：1. 對所有要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。s easy for me to get along well with等介紹自己合適志愿者的工作；用動詞短語have some plans for、 介詞短語like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、賓語從句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in ，短語豐富，句型多樣。，是文章文句精彩。，第一層闡述自己申請的理由，介紹自己開朗的性格適合志愿者的工作；第二層詳細介紹給英國學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動；最后表明自己的期待。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li lHua【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，以書信格式，根據(jù)所給材料寫申請信；書寫時材料要用全，注意緊扣主題，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。提示詞語：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes提示問題：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?Dear Sir/Madam，I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students. I39。你想成為志愿者。7．題目①假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校的英國友好校下周將要來訪。意思連貫；【點睛】本文語句通順，段落分明。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。（4）短文的開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與校名。（4）……（至少一條）。（2）你應(yīng)該理解父母，他們是愛孩子的，希望孩子前程似錦。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。【詳解】這是篇材料作文內(nèi)容要點給的比較詳細，考生主要把所有要點表達清楚連貫就是篇不錯的短文；參考詞匯中，給了一些很好的詞匯，考生一定要把它們?nèi)诤系阶魑睦铩＃〞诺拈_頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。on one’s initiative主動地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 樹立榜樣。（ brother， sister任選其一）內(nèi)容要點: （1）我一直想有個弟弟、妹妹；（2）去年我的夢想實現(xiàn)了，有了弟弟/妺妹；（3）他/她非?？蓯郏o我們帶來了歡樂，伴我成長，不再孤單；（4）我學(xué)會了分享和照顧家人；（5）請補充幾點弟弟、妹妹到來后你的變化。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細，內(nèi)容也很充實，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。同時注意語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當?shù)膯卧~、短語和句型表達。寫作時應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。然后結(jié)合自己的實際情況，對如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to