【正文】 ：Therefore, the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank ：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。[5]“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)。A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008To whom it may concern，I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four parents are both laidoff workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the would be greatly obliged if my application is I am looking forward to hearing from you yours，Song Xue 【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】[1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。五、助學(xué)貸款申請信 1)簡單介紹個人情況2)說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心【行文思路】本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。[9]“而不是”。[7]“遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出他們的消費(fèi)能力”。[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學(xué)生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象。：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ： 在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步，其中包括健康水平的提高。[9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機(jī)地”。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的“考證熱”。－佚名《詩經(jīng)周南關(guān)雎》第三篇：大學(xué)英語四六級聽力高分必備詞匯四六級聽力必備技巧、詞匯：短對話聽力的一些原則挫折原則：通常要辦的事情都是不順利的(如買東西買不到，訂房間客滿等)男女原則：一般男生比較衰，女生比較牛?！对娊?jīng)*邶風(fēng)》 ◆豈不爾思，遠(yuǎn)莫致之。《漢樂府》◆只緣感君一回顧，使我思君朝與暮。納蘭性德《蝶戀花》 ◆為君沉醉又何妨，只怕酒醒時候斷人腸。知否小窗紅燭，照人此夜凄涼。李商隱《無題》 ◆身無彩鳳雙飛翼，心有靈犀一點(diǎn)通。張仲素《燕子樓》 ◆憑杖飛魂招楚些，我思君處君思我。從別后，憶相逢，幾回魂夢與君同。李白《秋風(fēng)詞》◆試問閑愁都幾許，一川煙草，滿城風(fēng)絮，梅子黃時雨。元稹《離思》 ◆惟將終夜長開眼，報答平生未展眉。同理也禁用People）第一段好三點(diǎn)的開頭語句：Based on the above statements/From what we have discussed/Judging from theabove can predict the tendency that……/We may safely draw a conclusion that……建議結(jié)尾：Evidenced, it is high time that we took measure toslove this issue /problem/Immediate measures must be taken before it getstoo serious/late第二類：正反觀點(diǎn)型第一段觀點(diǎn)AWhen asked about……/When to es ^/faced with…………many people believethat ……,they think/hold/argue/claim/maintain/advocate………………/When it es to ^people’s opinions hokd the opinion that……….There is ageneral discussion today about the issue of………….These who advocate…………argue that…………第二段：while others think /believe …………三段：Weighting the pros and cons of this arguments,I am inclined to agree the former/latter point of view that…………/In my ipinion /To my mind /As for a balance view /a bination of the two is a better choice.…………第二篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文高分攻略◆淚眼問花花不語，亂紅飛過秋千去。歐陽修《蝶戀花》 ◆侯門一入深似海，從此蕭郎是路人。元稹《遣悲懷》◆秋風(fēng)清，秋月明。賀鑄《青玉案》 ◆斷無蜂蝶慕幽香，紅衣脫盡芳心苦。晏幾道《鷓鴣天》◆落花人獨(dú)立，微雨燕雙飛。蘇軾《蝶戀花》◆十年生死兩茫茫。李商隱《無題》 ◆嫦娥應(yīng)悔偷靈藥，碧海青天夜夜心。納蘭性德《清平樂》◆回廊一寸相思地，落月成孤倚。秦觀《虞美人》 ◆一登樓，便作春江都是淚，流不盡，許多愁?！稘h樂府》 ◆山有木兮木有枝，心悅君兮君不知。女子有行，遠(yuǎn)父母兄弟。男生提出的觀點(diǎn)女生都是不同意或有不同看法的，反之女生提出的觀點(diǎn)男生都是同意和贊賞的。分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因。[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。[10]“只是，僅僅”。：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it es to ：我認(rèn)為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因。[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”[4]用于引出原因。beyond表示“超出…范圍”?！炯丫渑R摹】：