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【正文】 注意：信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。這一命題思路具有里程碑意義：題目更加開放，書面表達(dá)能力和思維能力要求明顯提高。 短文改錯(cuò)有很大的提升空間！ 書面表達(dá)研究 1）考試方向（摘自周道義老師講座內(nèi)容） ? 2022—2022 書面表達(dá) :從話題和要求，看命題思路的延續(xù)與變化 ? 2022：寫信：推薦 《 英漢 /漢英詞典 》 還是 《 新華詞典 》 ？ ? 2022： Film or book, which do you prefer? ? 2022：生日慶祝方式 。 段落的啟承轉(zhuǎn)合 Man is closely related to the environment.（啟） Our environment provides man with fresh air to breathe, clean water to drink, various vegetables to eat and fertile soil in which to plant.（承） Man could hardly survive if he couldn’t get the necessities he needed from the environment.（承） Even when he sleeps, he needs quiet surroundings.（承） So a good environment is essential to man’s life.（合） 語篇的啟承轉(zhuǎn)合 引言段（啟和承） Man is closely related to the environment. Our environment provides man with fresh air to breathe, clean water to drink, various vegetables to eat and fertile soil in which to plant. Man could hardly survive if he couldn’t get the necessities he needed from the environment. Even when he sleeps, he needs quiet surroundings. So a good environment is essential to man’s life. 推展段（轉(zhuǎn)） However, our environment is faced with many dangers. It is seriously polluted by chemical wastes from factories and sewage in the city. Farmland is also overworked and has lost its fertility. Some even have bee sandy. Moreover, trees are being cut down, thus a large scale of forests species of plants and animals are disappearing from the earth. The balance of nature is being destroyed. 結(jié)論段（合） Effective measures must be taken to protect our environment. Laws must be passed to prohibit factories from emitting wasted gases and releasing water before they are purified. Moreover, people should be forbidden to throw away rubbish whenever and wherever they like. And rare animals must be well preserved. Finally, new models of vehicles should be invented, which give off fewer exhausted fumes and less noise than the old ones. Only in this way can man have a pleasant environment to live in. 段與段之間的邏輯關(guān)系 In ancient Egypt, the pharaoh(法老 ) treated the poor message runner like a prince when he arrived at the palace, if he brought good news. However, if the exhausted runner had the misfortune to bring the pharaoh unhappy news, his head was cut off. Shades of that spirit spread over today’s conversations. Once a friend and I packed up some peanut butter and sandwiches for an outing. As we walked lightheartedly out the door, piic basket in hand, a smiling neighbor looked up at the sky and said, “Oh boy, bad day for a piic. The weatherman says it’s going to rain.” I wanted to strike him on the face with the peanut butter and sandwiches. Not for his stupid weather report, for his smile. Several months ago I was racing to catch a bus. As I breathlessly put my handful of cash across the Greyhound counter, the sales agent said with a broad smile, “Oh that bus left five minutes ago.” Dreams of headcutting! It’s not the news that makes someone angry. It’s the unsympathetic attitude with which it’s delivered. Everyone must give bad news from time to time, and winning professionals do it with the proper attitude. A doctor advising a patient that she needs an operation does it in a caring way. A boss informing an employee he didn’t get the job takes on a sympathetic tone. Big winners know, when delivering any bad news, they should share the feeling of the receiver. Unfortunately, many people are not aware of this. When you’re tired from a long flight, has a hotel clerk cheerfully said that y
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