【正文】 要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。convenient 方便的；in one’s opinion按某人的觀點(diǎn)16．（要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)90字左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些？2. 它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么？3. 你認(rèn)為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么？要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱(chēng)和姓名；2. 語(yǔ)意連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。13．（其次短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言得體。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。題目中有詞匯的提示，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意使用。 12．（表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱(chēng)。點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為T(mén)ommy寫(xiě)一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉江蘇中考模擬）臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開(kāi)展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫(xiě)一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書(shū)，認(rèn)為看書(shū)有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語(yǔ)及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來(lái)表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. 【答案】Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three . classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day．Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running, and jumping on the playground.Our school life is being more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的變化。福建中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著陽(yáng)光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在全國(guó)的開(kāi)展，“每天鍛煉一小時(shí)，健康工作 50 年，幸福生活一輩子。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀認(rèn)為父母供他們吃好穿好是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?，不知道感恩為什么要感恩父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；老師的授業(yè)之恩；朋友的……怎樣感恩……（至少兩點(diǎn)） 要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。同時(shí)，建議對(duì)方做一些事情，可以向孩子們展示一下你的家鄉(xiāng)。本材料給的提示比較多，學(xué)生可以按照提示，進(jìn)行問(wèn)題的回答即可。6．（3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是…的。如but, so, then等。t control themselves and often play games. What39。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī)，一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點(diǎn)。短文以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語(yǔ)言的地道。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more,