【正文】 【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。假如你是李華，請你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號召。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。提示詞語：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。2.要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。6．環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。5．書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sente