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有相關(guān)信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;詞數(shù):100 詞左右;不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容,我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多,寫作時要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議,這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性,尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容?!玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整,包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容,沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,注意了被動形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時注意了條理性,使文章具有層次感,條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合,并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞,使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 4.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫一篇100詞左右的文章(文章開頭已給出)。學(xué)會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學(xué)會微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。使你自信,擊敗你的人有時就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂,傳遞友誼,拉近距離。參考詞匯: 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文,要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn),首先要研究表格,找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn),然后加以整合,也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫,但要點(diǎn)一定要全,不能漏掉。寫作時要注意遣詞造句,不能受漢語的影響,要用地道的英語表達(dá),注意時態(tài),語態(tài),單詞拼寫,語法等問題,用好簡單句,適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句??梢杂靡恍└呒壴~匯。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。5.書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: