【正文】 tried to translate anything into teacher advised me to keep my followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple day I wrotea little story and showed to my liked it very much and reads it to the said the story was a good word were a great encouragement to me.（五）Dear Ralph, I?m a newer here of a small would describe myself asshy and my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well 39。m sure they will laugh to me and see me asa I feel happy every , I have few don39。t know that they don39。t like to talk with , we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we bee stranger at am trying to improve the situation since it doesn?tseem to you tell me about what I should do?Yours，Xiao Wei（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of may go to a film, or a , a concert can be very can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite then, a concert cost so may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend ?s how I39。 m going to do.（七）Dear Susan, I?m very glad to hear about you are ing to visit me the next , I won?t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the won?t find difficult to get to the city airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship class will be over by then or I will pick you up will take you together toa hotpot restaurant for dinner and we?ll talk with our plan for the weekend over a pleasant trip and see you , Zhang Ming(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the ?s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the have been reports in America about people trying to steal personInformations for bad information on the Net is not all information are good to example, you can find such information like how to kill problem will bee more serious in the future.（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can even last your collection of stamps are easy because they are and birthday postcards from relatives and letters from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the once you?ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors?Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor make their livesby collecting and selling used children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population president of a developing country once said?！癐t is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ?produce? child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（1）第一行：twodays 改為twoday 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改為us 第五行：visiting 改為visited第六行：pictures；passed 第七行：去down 第八行：and改為but第九行：去at（2）第一行：with改為on第二行：many改為some第三行：because of 第四行：刪去 be；read改為reading第五行：programs第六行：noisy 第七行：On改為In第八行：去掉want前的to；real改為really(3)第一行：so改為and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改為players；then改為now第四行：once改為any；刪去in第五行：to改為for第六行：go改為going；第七行：was改為is第八行：their改為his(4)第一行：write后加in第二行：去掉第一個(gè)in第三行：anything改為everything第四行：my改為a；去掉should第五行：talk改為talking 第六行：me改為myself 第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改為read；word改為words(5)第一行：of改為from 第二行：quietly改為quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改為at第四行：happy改為unhappy/sad第五行：that改為why；talked改為talk第六行：stranger改為strangers 第七行：since改為but 第八行：去掉about(6)第一行：劃掉myself ；a 改為the 第二行：visit 改為visiting 第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改為exciting第五行：So改為But 第六行：cost改為costs；giving改為given第七行：are改為is第八行：how改為what（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the第二行：although改為because / as 第三行：find 后加it第四行：minute 改為minutes；rightly 改為right 第五行：or 改為and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改為about 第七行：Having 改為Have（8）第一行：kinds 改為kinds of ；minute改為minutes 第二行：have改為having 第三行：去掉even第四行：They改為There ；person改為personal 第五行：informations改為information；easily改為easy 第六行：are改為is第七行：what改為how（9）第一行：age改為ages第二行：interested改為interesting 第三行：your改為their；what改為which/that 第四行：lifetime前加a；are改為 is第五行：nowhere改為everywhere 第六行：for改為with；So改為But第七行：去掉in 第八行：exist改為exists（10）第一行：去掉a第二行：live改為living 第三行：thing改為things 第四行：去掉第二個(gè)to第五行：在you前加do第六行：on改為in 第七行：us改為we第八行：child改為children 第九行：tthisthese 第十行：clear改為clearly