【正文】 看似充實； ，一段到底，較難辨別要點；、鉛筆，還有用膠帶紙粘的，有用修正帶的，有同一字母來回重復畫的，這直接造成卷面差；,特別是在單個的副詞或短語之后的單詞首字母大寫。如：Now, You …，In my opinion, It …分要點評價 要點一好詞好句： you on your reasons why I advise you to e to China are as follows: 典型錯誤：as far as you/I concerned，I heard about you go to writting you to … 要點二好詞好句：quantities ofThere is no doubt that …As time goes by, …What’s more, moreover, furthermore, last but not least…典型錯誤：at the firstThe China is develop are many chance/ will wele in could have different culture 好詞好句：in short I would appreciate it if you accept my will spare no effort to help ：I sure I will help forward your 信開頭’m writing to give you some suggestions, which I hope might be of some help to could express my happiness on hear that you intend to work in that you will graduate and decide to seek for a job in China, I feel very my opinion, it’s a good choice to work in you are good at Chinese, I strongly remend you to find a job in may as well make the best of your qualifications to find a job only will you enrich your knowledge but you will also experience a variety of is no doubt that you have an advantage over others in terms of language and being more job opporunities here, you are more likely to find a suitable addition, you will also have the chance to make the aquaintance of the Chinese is a wide range of jobs to choose from, so it’s not necessary for you do worry about what to you have difficulty adjusting to the new surroundings, don’t hesitate to turn to me for promise that I will offer help whenever necessary sincerely hope these suggestions will meet with your in all, it is beneficial for you to ry a new would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into can give you a hand whenever and wherever you geit into 精彩句式（一）要點一 puzzled you most is whether you should e to China after your reason for this is not far to reasons are as suggestion is that you should … far as I am concerned , It’s a wise decision for you to e to China to find a that you’ll gradute soon , I strongly remend that you should e to China to find a job.(二)要點二 the development of economy, there is no denying that there are a lot of challenges and chances in China, which is of great benefit for you to find a suitable to England ,China has more opportunity to hunt for a job,which means that you can choose what ever you ’s what you major in that makes you stand out.(三)要點三 all the factors above into consideration, working in China is really a good choice for you.. as it may be when you e to a foreign country, it is worthwhile to do it.. promise to do you a favour when you have difficulty in adapdting to the you get into trouble, don’t hesitate to tell will spare no efforts to help ： 后的賓從沒有用虛擬語氣。，并且advice是不可數(shù)名詞的特點沒有掌握。 forward to doing 使用錯誤 拼寫錯誤，拼寫成了changes 拼寫錯誤 in 使用錯誤一、問題：：different與difference ：major與majority ：look forward to的to ：look forward to doing 用成look forward to do 二、優(yōu)美句子要點一： far as I am concerned , It’s a wise decision for you to e to China to find a that you’ll gradute soon , I strongly remend that you should e to China to find a ： to England ,China has more opportunity to hunt for a job,which means that you can choose what ever you ’s what you majir in that makes you stand ： promise to do you a favour when you have difficulty in adapdting to the you get into trouble, don’t hesitate to tell will spare no efforts to help 對于高三二輪的閱卷工作，匯報如下：一、本次閱卷過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)的閃光點：在本次閱卷過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)的學生的閃光點和亮點明顯比以往要突出，主要體現(xiàn)在： ，學生的書寫相比以往有了極大的提高和改善，讓人賞心悅目的好卷面比比皆是。，也就是說，一篇文章看上去更像一篇文章了，讓人感覺是一個整體，不再是語言點的羅列或堆砌，而且，行文邏輯更加流暢，部分學生的文章從整體上給人一種渾然天成的感覺。，很多學生的文章中應用了高級詞匯。二、仍需提高的方面：，并且這個現(xiàn)象具有普遍性，不僅僅是書面表達得分低的學生有這個現(xiàn)象，即便是得分比較高的同學也存在著這個現(xiàn)象。、不準確。對介詞to與動詞不定時to的辨析不夠熟練。單復數(shù)使用比較隨意。部分文章中需要個人發(fā)揮的地方存在著兩個極端，要么無從發(fā)揮，要么發(fā)揮太廣太深從而導致詞不達意，甚至是離題。，從而導致部分語言點的落漏。、語態(tài)和人稱注意不夠。（只遇見了一個，但其書面表達文章寫得不錯）。，但是仍有個別學生的書寫需要大力提高，尤其是部分寫得比較好的同學的書寫。寫作閱卷中發(fā)現(xiàn)的問題： be 句型的運用，出現(xiàn)there have ； ；，主謂一致的問題；,advise,advice的詞性、用法不清；，但是卷面涂畫問題仍需強調并加以改善。我們學校的試卷和前幾次相比，書寫有了很大提高；學生普遍能用first of all,what’s more,last but not least等來表達層次，但是其他的連詞少得可憐。好詞靚句在學生的作文中幾乎無跡可尋，都是一些樸素無華的詞匯，能用對已是不錯。所以還是借鑒其他學校的吧。第五篇：高三英語書面表達(原創(chuàng))（xiexiebang推薦）最近，你班有一些學生在英語學習方面感到壓力很大，想提高成績但不知道通過什么樣的方法。為此，你的英語老師準備在你班進行“如何有效提高英語成績”的討論會。請你根據(jù)以下提示準備一篇發(fā)言稿。, 要堅持投入，加強背誦注意：，可適當增加細節(jié)以使文章連貫。：100詞左右。文章開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear classmates,I’m happy to stand here to share with you my idea on ：Dear classmates,I’m happy to stand here to share with you my idea on how to improve your English , you should set a you will be motivated to do your utmost to achieve your , always keep in mind that Rome was not built in one long as you devote yourself to your English study every day, your efforts will pay off sooner or , in English study, we cannot emphasize the importance of laying a solid foundation too , you’d better form a habit of memorizing the important points in but not least, it’s universally acknowledged that practice makes more exercises will enable you to put into use what you have learned in class and understand them wish everybody success in your English study!