【正文】 （二）Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?【范文】For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers whoflood into big men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city reasons, in my mind, can account for this social and foremost, the limited land can no longer produce enough crops for an everincreasing rural the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本題談?wù)摰氖且环N社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。第一段首句引入某一現(xiàn)象，第二句舉例說明，第三句是個(gè)過渡句，引起下面解釋原因段落的第二段；第三段是簡(jiǎn)潔的結(jié)束語，其中的賓語從句嵌套一個(gè)狀語從句。范文首先指出大量農(nóng)民工涌入大城市這一現(xiàn)象，并引出第二段所闡述的三個(gè)原因。首先，農(nóng)村有限的土地不能滿足日益增長(zhǎng)的人口消費(fèi)。其次，大城市有更多的工作機(jī)會(huì)。最后，農(nóng)民工向往大城市的生活，想永遠(yuǎn)居住在大城市。末段總結(jié)指出，如果創(chuàng)造一個(gè)健康的社會(huì)環(huán)境，農(nóng)民工就可以為國(guó)家做出更大的貢獻(xiàn)。第一段第二句中的construction site表示“建筑工地”，babysitter表示“幫人看孩子的人”。第二段第一點(diǎn)中的rural指“農(nóng)村的”；第三點(diǎn)中的permanently和admire分別指“永久地”和“羨慕”，receive education指“接受教育”。預(yù)測(cè)作文（三）Silence Is Gold“沉默是金”【范文】When we talk of the famous proverb “Silence is Gold”, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in proverb is especially true under several , if we have made a promise not to let out a secret, we should always keep , we should avoid talking over facts or statistics of which we are not , whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and , there are also some we find out a flaw in other39。s speaking or writing, we should not hesitate a moment to point it to friends or acquaintancesseeking advice, we should feel free to help a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases “silence is gold”, but in certain circumstances, talking is the right choice.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文的特色在于其并未完全肯定或完全否定所提到的諺語，而是從正、反兩個(gè)方面去分析，即第二段指出其正確性，第三段談例外情況；末段總結(jié)，呼應(yīng)全文。范文首先提出所要討論的諺語“沉默是金”。第二段分三個(gè)方面闡述其正確性，即發(fā)誓保守秘密，對(duì)于不確定的事情要保持沉默，而在表達(dá)自己的思想時(shí)，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。第三段指出例外，為別人指出錯(cuò)誤或?yàn)榕笥训忍峤ㄗh時(shí)，不要堅(jiān)持“沉默是金”。末段總結(jié)，呼應(yīng)第二、三段。第一段中的label...as...表示“將……看作……”，而explore...in depth表示“深入探究……”。第二段第一點(diǎn)中的make a promise表示“允諾”，let out a secret表示“泄露秘密”，keep silent表示“保持沉默”；第三點(diǎn)中的brevity is the soul of wit也是個(gè)諺語，表示“言貴簡(jiǎn)潔”。第三段第二點(diǎn)中的acquaintance指“熟人”。預(yù)測(cè)作文（四）A Letter of Application【范文】January , 2010Dear Sirs,I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday39。s China Daily for, as is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallel your have always been a top student in my specialized area, took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce petition in the job point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus the due process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your , if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 64543575 for further you for your favorable sincerely,Jenny Green【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這篇文章是一篇非常成功的求職信。首段表明了自己對(duì)經(jīng)理助理這一職位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知這一職位的，而后說明自己的條件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，說明自己在專業(yè)上是個(gè)尖子生，并指出對(duì)于其他課程自己做得同樣出色，為將來的工作奠定了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)；后兩句說明自己參加了各種學(xué)?；顒?dòng)，培養(yǎng)了多方面的能力。第三段首句說明自己非常希望能早日獲得面試的機(jī)會(huì)；次句說如果對(duì)方太忙，可以打電話聯(lián)系；末句對(duì)對(duì)方表示感謝，是一句客套話。首段中的keen表示“熱切的”，parallel這里做動(dòng)詞，表示“與……相當(dāng)，比得上”。第二段首句中的specialized area表示“專業(yè)領(lǐng)域”；第二句中的excel是不及物動(dòng)詞，表示“突出，超常，勝過他人”；第三句中的edge表示“優(yōu)勢(shì)”；第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多種多樣的”；第五句中的teamwork spirit表示“團(tuán)隊(duì)精神”，interpersonal skills表示“人際交往的能力”。、2002年7月、2003年1月我國(guó)上網(wǎng)用戶總?cè)藬?shù)，請(qǐng)描述其變化；；3．你認(rèn)為目前用戶在因特網(wǎng)使用中有什么困難或問題?！痉段摹縁rom the chart we can see clearly that the number of Internet surfers in our country has increased from million in July 2001 to million in July 2002, and then to million in January my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as , the Internet can help us acplish many tasks, including both work and play—searching for information has bee more convenient than ever, and safe online business is no longer a , surfing the Internet is being cheaper and cheaper—more and more people can afford negative effects of the Internet are also begin with, sitting too long before the puters is harmful to our body, especially our , more and more people bee indulged in playing video games or chatting online, which are in all, I should say the advantages outweigh the key lies in whether we can make good use of it to enhance both work and study.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】首段敘述從2001年至2003年我國(guó)上網(wǎng)用戶總?cè)藬?shù)的變化趨勢(shì)。第二段分兩方面給出其中的原因：首先是因特網(wǎng)方便快捷、作用巨大；其次是費(fèi)用降低。第三段分兩個(gè)方面指出面臨的困難和問題：首先是上網(wǎng)時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)有害健康；其次是有些人上網(wǎng)玩游戲、聊天，這都是不好的習(xí)慣。第四段做總結(jié)：第一句指出利大于弊；第二句說關(guān)鍵在于好好利用因特網(wǎng)。第二段首句中的in my mind意思是“依我看，在我看來”；第三段中的be harmful to意為“對(duì)……有傷害”，bee indulged in意思是“沉迷于”，timeconsuming是“浪費(fèi)時(shí)間”的意思；最后一段首句中的outweigh意為“比……重要”。