【正文】 habits or pastimes are only like an emptydream, and thy will be a historical page of my ，讓我回想到自己的童年 童年給我留下的美好回憶Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a position on the topic Military Training in My should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in 、Military Training in My MemoryFeeling anxious and perplexed, I stepped into the gate of Ocean of beginning classes in spacious and bright classrooms with knowledgeable professors as I expected, I, together with other freshmen, was taken to a military camp for a month of impression of the training is the strict discipline of the military the whistle blew, we had only one minute to get into our someone was late, he or she would be punished and made to stand at attention for one and love, however, were also felt in the now, I can still remember the laughter on a chilly night in the camp when we had a bonfire party to celebrate the MidAutumn of us became homesick, so a few soldiers played guitar and sang pop songs to usThrough military training I have acquired skills and traits that will benefit me for the rest of my I realize why we were taken to the military 軍訓(xùn)讓我學(xué)會了……第五篇：大學(xué)英語提綱式作文提綱式作文是歷年四、六級考試中最常見的題型。從1995年1月到1999年1月9次四級考試的作文題型都是這種形式。它要求考生根據(jù)給出的題目和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開論述，表達(dá)提綱的主旨。它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是提綱既體現(xiàn)了文章的層次，又規(guī)定了各段大體的內(nèi)容，為考生提供了一條思路，稍加思索、計劃、整理就可成文。但缺點(diǎn)是如果審題不當(dāng)，反而容易丟分。另外，它的限定性較大，不理解提綱所展現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容或詞匯，就會感到難以下筆。一、寫作步驟和技巧：1寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，認(rèn)清題目和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、內(nèi)容以及文體。2每一個提綱可以作為文章的一個段落層次，段落的展開圍繞提綱的中心和內(nèi)容，不能偏離，也不能任意增減。3提綱只是對文章的提示和概括，不是主題句。這需要根據(jù)提綱的性質(zhì)，寫出完整的、體現(xiàn)提綱主旨的句子，使之成為主題句。然后圍繞主題句進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展。4收集材料支持主題句。材料可以是事實(shí)、例證、親身經(jīng)歷、名人名言、諺語警句等。應(yīng)當(dāng)注意的是，所選材料要與文章的主題相符，即要“扣題”。同時要具有典型性，能充分說明問題。在有多個例證的段落中，還要注意各個例證之間的連貫性。二、審題和構(gòu)思：根據(jù)下題寫一篇不少于100詞的作文：My View on Jobhopping1）有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因為……2）有些人喜歡經(jīng)常換工作，因為……3）我的看法顯而易見，這是一道提綱式的作文題?？梢酝ㄟ^以下審題和構(gòu)思過程完成這篇作文：1．分析題目和提綱可知，應(yīng)該寫一篇說明文，當(dāng)然其中可以夾有議論。要寫出“不換工作”和“換工作”的原因，然后給出自己的看法，重點(diǎn)是原因和看法。2．根據(jù)提綱，文章可分3段，第1段是“喜歡從事一種工作”的原因；第2段寫出“喜歡經(jīng)常換工作”的原因；第3段是“我的”看法。3．根據(jù)以上分析，可以把提綱轉(zhuǎn)換為主題句如下：★Some people tend to stick to their position all the time．★Some people are different．They are in the habit of jobhopping．★I am not in favour of constant jobhopping． 4．以材料支持各段主題句。第1段的材料可以是：喜歡那份工作的各種原因：有發(fā)展前途、工資高等；第2段經(jīng)?！疤邸钡脑颍翰荒苁┱棺约旱牟拍?，謀求更高的收入等。第3段也要說明原因，并總結(jié)歸納，圓滿結(jié)尾。參考范文：My View on JobhoppingSome people tend tostick to their positions all the time，as they think the longer one works in a particular field，the more skillful one willbe at it．Some have been teachers all their lives．Some devote all their energy to scientific research．Such people love their work and turn out to be specialists in their own fields．They are usually high achievers．Some are different．They are in the habit of jobhopping，for they always purpose what is new and stimulating．They never seem content with their present situations．They like to meetmore people，make more money and new acquaintances，so they hop from job to job．As far as I am concerned，I am not in favour of constantjobhopping． I believe in a famous proverb，“A rolling stone gather no moss．”I want to be professionally strong．And I respect those who devote themselves to their affectionate jobs throughout their life