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__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was a cloudy day. On March 28, 2021, we visited the science museum by bus. The science museum was very big and interesting. Then we watched the robots dance. It was so much fun. After that, we learned how to make a robot model. I was so excited. At last, I bought some gifts for my parents in the gift shop and bought some clothes in the shopping centre. Although I was tired, I was really happy. 思 路 點(diǎn) 撥 第四步:修改文章 —自己復(fù)查,小組互改。 1) 用紅筆在文章中糾錯(cuò) 2) 欣賞好詞好句:評選小組內(nèi)寫得最好的三個(gè)句子,摘抄下來。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思 路 點(diǎn) 撥 (省略)