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ide said I was the youngest one ever to take that any fear or hesitation, I flew into the intoxicating boat fast moving, the sea breeze swaying, and the golden sunshine setting off the greenish orchid sea constituted a view like flying experience was glorious and I was totally immersed in that exciting up, I now understand that only by taking a risk can I see what other people cannot see and enjoy what they cannot are you interested in attending the University of Notre Dame?The University of Notre Dame first came into my mind when I saw the movie Rudy in my middle fascinating view of the Notre Dame campus and the batant spirit of the football team were so appealing to me that I decided at once to plan to pursue my academic enthusiasm in this fairy tale about Rudy, the ocean of knowledge and courage it has, the Mendoza College of Business with its traditions and teaching of values and morals, all attract me..I am particularly interested in the business school and I am going to apply to is well known, the lack of moral sense and principles of food producers in China has resulted in food poisoning and the loss of trust from the hope, through my own efforts, I can convert some businessmen’s moral values and thus do something to help the Chinese people.第五篇:如何規(guī)范撰寫美國留學(xué)申請個人陳述個人陳述:是在申請過程中按照學(xué)校要求來寫一篇有關(guān)申請人背景,學(xué)術(shù)成就和未來研究和職業(yè)目標(biāo)的文章。一篇成功的個人陳述應(yīng)不但應(yīng)該語言流暢,邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),層次分明,更要充分顯示申請人的才華并抓住審閱人的注意力。幾乎所有學(xué)校都要求提交個人陳述。只要每到申請季節(jié)來臨時,一個招生評委一天大概必須要看5~10篇個人陳述,如果沒有吸引人的 “主題”和邏輯清楚的思路,加上 “敘述語句” 而非枯燥的純粹描述事實,招生委員會很快的將這篇Personal Statement略過。個人陳述也有不同的名稱,如Personal Statement,Statement of Purpose,Statement of Intent, Statement of Objectives, Academic Statement,Study Plan,Academic Objectives等。個人陳述內(nèi)容:(一)申請者的學(xué)術(shù)或?qū)I(yè)興趣及背景。(二)欲研究的方向。(三)未來的職業(yè)目標(biāo)。如果個人陳述寫作得當(dāng),可以很大程度地提高申請者獲得錄取和獎學(xué)金的機會。這對申請者來說是一個絕好的機會??上У氖呛芏嗌暾堈邔OEFL、GRE可謂嘔心瀝血,而對個人陳述往往一蹴而就,敷衍了事,內(nèi)容貧乏、語法錯誤連篇。而西方的大學(xué)并不單是通過傳統(tǒng)的考試來考評其申請者的資格,這并不是說他們的錄取標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不嚴(yán)格。外國教授在決定你是否正是他們想要的人時,首先希望聽一聽你對于你自己作何評價。當(dāng)你通過申請文書來介紹你自己時,你會發(fā)現(xiàn)所面臨的機遇和挑戰(zhàn)同樣之大。要寫出成功的申請文書僅僅有那些適用于任何類型寫作的基本寫作技巧(清晰、簡潔)是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的。一篇好的申請文書要求申請人能夠用一種與其他申請人完全不同方式,巧妙地展現(xiàn)自己的獨特個性和經(jīng)驗。這是一件要求比較高,通常非常繁累的工作。這不僅僅對中國人如此,以英語為母語的人在此類寫作時也會感到十分的頭疼,但是我們中國人還需克服語言的障礙。個人陳述寫作規(guī)范:個人陳述的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含下列三項資料:(一)申請者的學(xué)術(shù)或?qū)I(yè)興趣及背景。(二)欲研究的方向。(三)未來的職業(yè)目標(biāo)。寫作時,依以上三點將文章分為三各主要部分。不要像列清單,也不要重覆申請表格已有的資料。以上是嘉卓留學(xué)小編為大家介紹的如何撰寫美國留學(xué)申請個人陳述,希望對大家有幫助