【正文】 worried, sent me to the hospital in a checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after teacher fed me food and medicine on struggling with the serious illness in one days and one nights, I left my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in express gratitude to my teacher, I can’t recover so fast without my of my teacher I can participate today’s want to repay my present can express my grateful feeling to my the best repayment is that I can pass the CETD this Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:Your role: a tour guideYour audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: some weling words the schedule for the daya description of the place the tourists will be visiting( scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to ：Good morning, ladies and gentleman, wele to begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”，I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this following is schedule of the first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the bestpreserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient we are on the way to the Great back to the seven century ., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring the reasons of long history and its length, it bees one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。Above is my introduction to the Great any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.第四篇：英語四級(jí)作文真題Part Ⅰ Writing審題謀篇本次四級(jí)作文主題為“綠色校園”，這是一個(gè)看似簡單普通的話題，寫起來卻不是那么容易。因?yàn)楹芏嗫忌鷮τ凇熬G色校園”所表達(dá)的內(nèi)涵感覺比較生僻。假如對“綠色校園”這一主題感到難以把握，考生可以從作文提綱入手進(jìn)行分析以獲取對“綠色校園”這一概念的相關(guān)信息。根據(jù)作文提示2，可以看出此處的“綠色校園”指的決不僅僅是青青的草地和高大的樹木構(gòu)成的校園綠色風(fēng)景，也不僅僅指對校園環(huán)境的珍視和愛護(hù)，而是指一種環(huán)境保護(hù)的文化氛圍和師生具有的環(huán)境素養(yǎng)，以及由此帶來的和諧的人文環(huán)境和社會(huì)績效。在深入理解概念的基礎(chǔ)上，考生還應(yīng)對 “綠色校園”的重要性進(jìn)行剖析，這時(shí)，考生可以從多個(gè)角度組織素材，比如從校園的環(huán)境問題出發(fā)，進(jìn)而擴(kuò)展到師生的環(huán)境意識(shí)對“綠色校園”所產(chǎn)生的長遠(yuǎn)意義以及為未來環(huán)境改善所做的貢獻(xiàn)。最后是闡述建設(shè)“綠色校園”所要采取的措施。需要注意的就是作文給分的重點(diǎn)在于考生如何用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言詞匯表達(dá)自己的思想觀點(diǎn)。而不是寫得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三個(gè)自然段，大概十句話，基本的分布為首段、末段合起來五句或六句，中間段五句或四句，做到結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，重點(diǎn)突出，就可以了。參考范文Creating a Green CampusRecently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has bee a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their ’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to make “green campus” e true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable , it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the coeffort of the whole 近來，隨著建設(shè)并保持“綠色地球”的觀念成為社會(huì)關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，“綠色校園”也成為校園里流行的話題。這無疑會(huì)給我們的校園和社會(huì)帶來長遠(yuǎn)的利益。“綠色校園”不僅僅指綠色的環(huán)境，還包括人們頭腦中的環(huán)境意識(shí)。學(xué)校在培養(yǎng)年輕一代上起著關(guān)鍵作用，“綠色校園”的意識(shí)必定會(huì)對學(xué)生畢業(yè)后的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)產(chǎn)生長遠(yuǎn)影響。更為重要的是，年輕一代面臨著嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境污染，有太多問題等待他們?nèi)ソ鉀Q。為使“綠色校園”成為現(xiàn)實(shí)，首先應(yīng)該制定出可持續(xù)發(fā)展、可長遠(yuǎn)發(fā)展的有效政策。其次，還需要人們對環(huán)境污染的嚴(yán)肅性有正確認(rèn)識(shí)并采取實(shí)際行動(dòng)切實(shí)減少污染。最后但同樣重要的是，有必要加強(qiáng)學(xué)校和社會(huì)的聯(lián)系以便在全社會(huì)共同努力下使“綠色校園”順利實(shí)施。范文點(diǎn)評范文以“綠色校園”開篇，保證了文章切題。第一段開門見山，強(qiáng)調(diào)當(dāng)今環(huán)保理念下構(gòu)建“綠色校園”的長遠(yuǎn)意義。第二段，著重討論“綠色校園”的含義，指出“綠色校園”不僅指校園中的綠化，還指生活在校園中的人們的綠色和環(huán)保意識(shí)，把校園這個(gè)小環(huán)境和社會(huì)這個(gè)大環(huán)境結(jié)合起來，說理更加深刻。第三段是談及具體的做法，分一、二、三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述，無疑是使“綠色校園”的理念落在實(shí)處。結(jié)構(gòu)完整，首尾呼應(yīng)，用詞準(zhǔn)確。關(guān)系詞的正確使用讓句與句之間、段與段之間銜接緊湊，思想表達(dá)成熟有深度。【生動(dòng)的用詞】 maintain保持。concept概念。profound長遠(yuǎn)的。sustainable可持續(xù)的。recyclable可循環(huán)的?！矩S富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益。play a crucial role in發(fā)揮關(guān)鍵作用。under the burden of在??重負(fù)下。e true實(shí)現(xiàn)。call for要求?！径嘧兊木涫健糠段闹虚L句、短句、簡單句、復(fù)雜句交叉使用。不同句型之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，能讓閱卷老師更好地了解考生對句子結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握運(yùn)用，從而獲得高分。避錯(cuò)指導(dǎo)本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續(xù)了我們所熟悉校園類話題，但與社會(huì)背景有很大關(guān)系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會(huì)使環(huán)保減排這個(gè)主題成為焦點(diǎn)，在全世界都提倡可持續(xù)發(fā)展、和諧發(fā)展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時(shí)也是一個(gè)社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，這是我們審題時(shí)所必須考慮的。另外開篇時(shí)，切忌拖泥帶水，應(yīng)直截了當(dāng)，使閱卷老師對文章主題一目了然。除正確審題之外，考生還應(yīng)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用，不落俗套。不同句型之間轉(zhuǎn)換時(shí)，考生應(yīng)對句子結(jié)構(gòu)全面掌握，避免句式錯(cuò)誤造成扣分。最后，應(yīng)盡量避免單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。本次作文常見的卷面拼寫錯(cuò)誤如下表：正確拼寫 詞性及詞義 錯(cuò)誤的拼寫focus focuseeffect effection /affectenvironment envirment/invironmentburden burdon solve slove serious serous true turesociety soceitytheory thery總之，考生在構(gòu)思和寫作過程中要盡可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地選擇詞匯。畢竟，無錯(cuò)表達(dá)才是四級(jí)語言表達(dá)合格的核心。能力拓展【同義詞轉(zhuǎn)換】作文表達(dá)除了準(zhǔn)確，還要做到句式多變，詞匯靈活多樣。 → be aware of 意識(shí)到We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around 。 → preserve 保持It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the 。 → conduct 引導(dǎo)This will help conduct the activities of the college ?！驹掝}備考錦囊】 idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個(gè)綠色環(huán)境。 construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part invarious environmental protection “綠色校園”將會(huì)極大激勵(lì)學(xué)生參與環(huán)境保護(hù)。 bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be “綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。 construction is of vital