【正文】 bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be “綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。【話題備考錦囊】 idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個綠色環(huán)境。 → preserve 保持It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the 。能力拓展【同義詞轉換】作文表達除了準確，還要做到句式多變，詞匯靈活多樣。本次作文常見的卷面拼寫錯誤如下表：正確拼寫 詞性及詞義 錯誤的拼寫focus focuseeffect effection /affectenvironment envirment/invironmentburden burdon solve slove serious serous true turesociety soceitytheory thery總之，考生在構思和寫作過程中要盡可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地選擇詞匯。不同句型之間轉換時，考生應對句子結構全面掌握，避免句式錯誤造成扣分。另外開篇時，切忌拖泥帶水，應直截了當，使閱卷老師對文章主題一目了然。避錯指導本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續(xù)了我們所熟悉校園類話題，但與社會背景有很大關系?！径嘧兊木涫健糠段闹虚L句、短句、簡單句、復雜句交叉使用。e true實現(xiàn)。play a crucial role in發(fā)揮關鍵作用。recyclable可循環(huán)的。profound長遠的。【生動的用詞】 maintain保持。結構完整，首尾呼應，用詞準確。第二段，著重討論“綠色校園”的含義，指出“綠色校園”不僅指校園中的綠化，還指生活在校園中的人們的綠色和環(huán)保意識，把校園這個小環(huán)境和社會這個大環(huán)境結合起來，說理更加深刻。范文點評范文以“綠色校園”開篇，保證了文章切題。其次，還需要人們對環(huán)境污染的嚴肅性有正確認識并采取實際行動切實減少污染。更為重要的是，年輕一代面臨著嚴重的環(huán)境污染，有太多問題等待他們?nèi)ソ鉀Q?！熬G色校園”不僅僅指綠色的環(huán)境，還包括人們頭腦中的環(huán)境意識。參考范文Creating a Green CampusRecently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has bee a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their ’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to make “green campus” e true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable , it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the coeffort of the whole 近來，隨著建設并保持“綠色地球”的觀念成為社會關注的焦點，“綠色校園”也成為校園里流行的話題。而不是寫得越多，得分就越高。最后是闡述建設“綠色校園”所要采取的措施。根據(jù)作文提示2，可以看出此處的“綠色校園”指的決不僅僅是青青的草地和高大的樹木構成的校園綠色風景，也不僅僅指對校園環(huán)境的珍視和愛護，而是指一種環(huán)境保護的文化氛圍和師生具有的環(huán)境素養(yǎng)，以及由此帶來的和諧的人文環(huán)境和社會績效。因為很多考生對于“綠色校園”所表達的內(nèi)涵感覺比較生僻。for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the heartfelt thanks to you, dear the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for you have done enriches my mind and broadens my this day I honour you one deserves a bigger thank you than day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.［參考范文之二］National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely still remember last year when I was feeling lost, down and out, I had no idea about my life,my love, my study even doubt why I was here in the then came so much wine and smoke, I was tired, physical and even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she also told me that’s very mon like many young people of my told me to call her anytime I need her did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone just can’t remember when e the have found myself now!Another teacher’s day,to all the teachers,to our parents.［參考范文之三］The Once per year ’s Teacher’s Day will e first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after teacher fed me food and medicine on struggling with the serious illness in one days and one nights, I left my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in express gratitude to my teacher, I can’t recover so fast without my of my teacher I can participate today’s want to repay my present can express my grateful feeling to my the best repayment is that I can pass the CETD this Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:Your role: a tour guideYour audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: some weling words the schedule for the daya description of the place the tourists will be visiting( scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to ：Good morning, ladies and gentleman, wele to begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”，I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this following is schedule of the first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the bestpreserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient we are on the way to the Great back to the seven century ., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring the reasons of long history and its length, it bees one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。 3． 學生自選