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e an increasing popularity. I, myself, hold the view that … 3)”錯(cuò)題集”的建立 把寫作中常用到的易錯(cuò)詞匯,專門記錄在一個(gè)本子上,時(shí)刻把它拿出來,寫一寫, 背一背正確的拼寫、表達(dá)。這樣,才不至于在考試中重蹈覆轍。 4)勤練書寫,保證卷面整潔 考生一定要養(yǎng)成書寫整潔的習(xí)慣,給人以美好的第一印象。這就好比是一本內(nèi)容非常精彩的小說一樣,如果封面設(shè)計(jì)無任何美感可言,放在書店里,是很難讓人一眼就從那么多的書籍中看中它并拿出來仔細(xì)欣賞的。 Ⅱ 、段落銜接與拓展 A、廣州一模參考范文 : Personally, I prefer to study alone. I find studying alone more challenging and exciting. Each time ! e up with an idea after a long time thinking, I feel a great sense of achievement. Studying alone also allows me to develop independent thinking which is a very important skill I need as I grow older and must solve the problems myself without the help of parents and teachers. Our teachers often encourage us to study in groups. I enjoy my friends39。 pany, but in group study, I find we spend far less time studying and more time playing games and having fun. It is for these reasons that I believe the most effective way to learn new knowledge is by studying alone. Our school offers many different kinds of afterschool activities. These include sports, music and drama. I?m one of the members of drama club. I think it is very important for students to participate in extracurricular activities. Extracurricular activities can improve our social life, introducing us to new people outside our class or school. In addition, they can reduce the stress and pressure we experience as the result of our studies. Also, they can bring us a lot of enjoyment. If we feel fresh and relaxed we can study better, so they will also be good for our grades. Thus, in my view, if we focus too much on any one thing, either study or afterschool activities will be negatively affected. But with the right balance both can improve. 小結(jié) : A、通過列舉詞匯來進(jìn)行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 1. first, second, third 2. firstly, secondly, thirdly 3. first, furthermore, finally 4. in the first place, in the second place,finally 5. last but not least 6. first and most important 7. to begin with, next, then, finally 8. the former…the latter the first step ,the second step, the next step B、通過說明詞匯來進(jìn)行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 for example including for instance mainly namely such as C、通過強(qiáng)調(diào)詞匯來進(jìn)行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 obviously certainly undoubtedly especially surely above all indeed most important of all In fact most importantly very D、通過并列詞匯來進(jìn)行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 and or that is, that39。s to say not only…but ( also) in other words both…and as well as neither…nor either…or E、通過補(bǔ)充詞匯來進(jìn)行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 also( too) furthermore further moreover what is more then in addition besides as well( as) but however ( al) though yet except for nevertheless F、通過轉(zhuǎn)折詞匯來進(jìn)行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 G、通過因果 \結(jié)論詞匯 \分詞 \復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等來進(jìn)行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 Practice A: Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? Nowadays, some people think that “Lucky numbers” can bring them good luck. ____________, they pay quite a lot for car license plates or telephone numbers with “eight”, ____________this number in Chinese is pronounced “ba” which is similar to the pronunciation of the Chinese character “fa”, meaning making a fortune As a result because __________, other people believe that numbers have nothing to do with luck. They can give many examples to show that some of the people who have a car license plate or a telephone number with the socalled lucky number have not had good fortune at all _______________, numbers can not determine whether we will have good luck or we will make a lot of money. _________ working hard and being honest can bring us good luck. However In my opinion Only The Value of Time A proverb says: “Time is money”. ____ in my opinion, time is ______ ______ precious than money. When money is spent, we can earn it , when time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason why we must save time. It goes without saying that the time at our disposal is unusually , even an hour is extremely precious. We should make full use of our time to do useful things. As students we must not relax our efforts to engage in our studies so as to serve society and our nation in the future. Practice B: But even more However Hence It is a pity that there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time. They spend their precious time smoking, drinking and gambling. They do not realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life. __________, we should get into the good habit of saving time. Do not put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Laziness will ___________bring us failure _____________lead us to the road of poverty. In a word not only but also 啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合 啟 :啟動(dòng)觀點(diǎn),開篇點(diǎn)題 承 :涉及文章第二段(拓展段),原因一、二、三,方面一、二、三要有層次感 轉(zhuǎn) :表示轉(zhuǎn)折 合 :表示合并總結(jié) Summary: 審讀短文,概括大意 : 它是一個(gè)獲取信息、加工信息的過程,是客觀簡(jiǎn)要地轉(zhuǎn)述或表達(dá)作者的觀點(diǎn)的過程。 1)全面,不能漏掉主要意思或觀點(diǎn),要包含原文所有的主要觀點(diǎn); 2)客觀,不能加入個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)或評(píng)論,要實(shí)事求是地表達(dá); 3)準(zhǔn)確,不能與所給短文內(nèi)容、事實(shí)不相符或偏離事實(shí),要忠實(shí)于原材料的觀點(diǎn)、意圖等; 4)簡(jiǎn)練,不能表達(dá)羅嗦、冗長(zhǎng),要盡量 符合題目對(duì)詞數(shù)(大約 30)方面的要求; 5)重述,不能抄襲材料中的句子,要用自己的語言轉(zhuǎn)述短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 緊扣提示,發(fā)表看法。 緊扣提示。 就是要圍繞題目的要求論述。 發(fā)表看法。 發(fā)表個(gè)人看法,要注意以下的技巧: 1)從內(nèi)容上,要包含全部的提示要求; 2)從論述方法和論證上,要做到:觀點(diǎn)鮮明;論據(jù)充分;論證嚴(yán)密;有理有據(jù);敘述和論證合乎邏輯。 3)從語言表達(dá)上,要盡量做到:選詞準(zhǔn)確;表述規(guī)范;表達(dá)豐富多彩(使用高級(jí)詞匯、 短語和較為復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu))。 4)從謀篇布局上,要做到:①思路要清晰,段落分明,層次清楚,注意時(shí)間順序、空間順序、邏輯順序,做到一個(gè)主要觀點(diǎn)一個(gè)段落;②文章首尾呼應(yīng),行文銜接連貫;③篇章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),一氣呵成。 檢查成品,修正暇疵 修正語法錯(cuò)誤和不規(guī)范的語言以及過長(zhǎng)或過短的篇幅。 Ⅲ 、