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e an increasing popularity. I, myself, hold the view that … 3)”錯題集”的建立 把寫作中常用到的易錯詞匯,專門記錄在一個本子上,時刻把它拿出來,寫一寫, 背一背正確的拼寫、表達。這樣,才不至于在考試中重蹈覆轍。 4)勤練書寫,保證卷面整潔 考生一定要養(yǎng)成書寫整潔的習慣,給人以美好的第一印象。這就好比是一本內容非常精彩的小說一樣,如果封面設計無任何美感可言,放在書店里,是很難讓人一眼就從那么多的書籍中看中它并拿出來仔細欣賞的。 Ⅱ 、段落銜接與拓展 A、廣州一模參考范文 : Personally, I prefer to study alone. I find studying alone more challenging and exciting. Each time ! e up with an idea after a long time thinking, I feel a great sense of achievement. Studying alone also allows me to develop independent thinking which is a very important skill I need as I grow older and must solve the problems myself without the help of parents and teachers. Our teachers often encourage us to study in groups. I enjoy my friends39。 pany, but in group study, I find we spend far less time studying and more time playing games and having fun. It is for these reasons that I believe the most effective way to learn new knowledge is by studying alone. Our school offers many different kinds of afterschool activities. These include sports, music and drama. I?m one of the members of drama club. I think it is very important for students to participate in extracurricular activities. Extracurricular activities can improve our social life, introducing us to new people outside our class or school. In addition, they can reduce the stress and pressure we experience as the result of our studies. Also, they can bring us a lot of enjoyment. If we feel fresh and relaxed we can study better, so they will also be good for our grades. Thus, in my view, if we focus too much on any one thing, either study or afterschool activities will be negatively affected. But with the right balance both can improve. 小結 : A、通過列舉詞匯來進行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 1. first, second, third 2. firstly, secondly, thirdly 3. first, furthermore, finally 4. in the first place, in the second place,finally 5. last but not least 6. first and most important 7. to begin with, next, then, finally 8. the former…the latter the first step ,the second step, the next step B、通過說明詞匯來進行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 for example including for instance mainly namely such as C、通過強調詞匯來進行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 obviously certainly undoubtedly especially surely above all indeed most important of all In fact most importantly very D、通過并列詞匯來進行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 and or that is, that39。s to say not only…but ( also) in other words both…and as well as neither…nor either…or E、通過補充詞匯來進行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 also( too) furthermore further moreover what is more then in addition besides as well( as) but however ( al) though yet except for nevertheless F、通過轉折詞匯來進行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 G、通過因果 \結論詞匯 \分詞 \復合結構等來進行句子與段落的銜接與拓展 Practice A: Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? Nowadays, some people think that “Lucky numbers” can bring them good luck. ____________, they pay quite a lot for car license plates or telephone numbers with “eight”, ____________this number in Chinese is pronounced “ba” which is similar to the pronunciation of the Chinese character “fa”, meaning making a fortune As a result because __________, other people believe that numbers have nothing to do with luck. They can give many examples to show that some of the people who have a car license plate or a telephone number with the socalled lucky number have not had good fortune at all _______________, numbers can not determine whether we will have good luck or we will make a lot of money. _________ working hard and being honest can bring us good luck. However In my opinion Only The Value of Time A proverb says: “Time is money”. ____ in my opinion, time is ______ ______ precious than money. When money is spent, we can earn it , when time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason why we must save time. It goes without saying that the time at our disposal is unusually , even an hour is extremely precious. We should make full use of our time to do useful things. As students we must not relax our efforts to engage in our studies so as to serve society and our nation in the future. Practice B: But even more However Hence It is a pity that there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time. They spend their precious time smoking, drinking and gambling. They do not realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life. __________, we should get into the good habit of saving time. Do not put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Laziness will ___________bring us failure _____________lead us to the road of poverty. In a word not only but also 啟、承、轉、合 啟 :啟動觀點,開篇點題 承 :涉及文章第二段(拓展段),原因一、二、三,方面一、二、三要有層次感 轉 :表示轉折 合 :表示合并總結 Summary: 審讀短文,概括大意 : 它是一個獲取信息、加工信息的過程,是客觀簡要地轉述或表達作者的觀點的過程。 1)全面,不能漏掉主要意思或觀點,要包含原文所有的主要觀點; 2)客觀,不能加入個人的觀點或評論,要實事求是地表達; 3)準確,不能與所給短文內容、事實不相符或偏離事實,要忠實于原材料的觀點、意圖等; 4)簡練,不能表達羅嗦、冗長,要盡量 符合題目對詞數(大約 30)方面的要求; 5)重述,不能抄襲材料中的句子,要用自己的語言轉述短文的內容要點。 緊扣提示,發(fā)表看法。 緊扣提示。 就是要圍繞題目的要求論述。 發(fā)表看法。 發(fā)表個人看法,要注意以下的技巧: 1)從內容上,要包含全部的提示要求; 2)從論述方法和論證上,要做到:觀點鮮明;論據充分;論證嚴密;有理有據;敘述和論證合乎邏輯。 3)從語言表達上,要盡量做到:選詞準確;表述規(guī)范;表達豐富多彩(使用高級詞匯、 短語和較為復雜的語法結構)。 4)從謀篇布局上,要做到:①思路要清晰,段落分明,層次清楚,注意時間順序、空間順序、邏輯順序,做到一個主要觀點一個段落;②文章首尾呼應,行文銜接連貫;③篇章結構嚴謹,一氣呵成。 檢查成品,修正暇疵 修正語法錯誤和不規(guī)范的語言以及過長或過短的篇幅。 Ⅲ 、